Back to Basics Challenge - Fic: Pas de Deux - Part 5: Coda (G-R) for insight2

[neevebrody]

Coda - Conclusion

"Over here!"  Ronon called.  He studied a Genii soldier with bound hands and feet, bent to feel for a pulse, and started when the soldier flinched at his touch.

Lorne arrived first, followed by Teyla and the other Marines.  "He's alive," Ronon said.

"Well, at least we know we're headed in the right direction," one of

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[roxy_palace]

You are one awesome story teller lady!

[neevebrody]

Oh God, you read this? This was my first ever challenge fic and probably only my second or third writing effort. One of these days I want to go back and polish it up. I ran out of time to develop some of the points in the story they way I wanted to and got some bad advice on some things that I had to cut out of it. But I did enjoy writing it because of the way we had to stick so close to canon and writing the whole Team, especially Ronon and Lorne was loads of fun.

I'm certainly glad you were intrepid enough to read it and enjoyed it. ;)

[roxy_palace]

No, it was great...great balance of action and romance. And the scene with John and Rodney in the shack was just gorgeous!

When I find a fic writer I like I tend to read everything they've done, so I'm not stalking you! I'm just being thorough! I don't want to miss anything!

[neevebrody]

Oh, I didn't think you were stalking me - it's just that some of that earlier work kind of makes me cringe when I look at it now. I suppose all writers feel that way. Don't want to stop you from reading at all! *g* I did a mini_nanowrimo project that you might like. It was 30 fics, ficlets, drabbles, in 30 days, all episode related, all about the growing relationship between John and Rodney - staring with Rising and going all the way to S4. Now some of those were rough, but consider - conceiving, writing, editing and posting all in a single day! (And all with a full time job). I was totally exhausted by month's end and thought I'd never want to write again, but the exercise actually served it's purpose in helping me to write every day and improve (I hope) my writing a little. Just click on the mini_nanowrimo tag

[roxy_palace]

I've been saving them up for a rainy day actually. I saw them on your page and got very excited. I want to go through them one by one.

It sounds like a real achievement! I'm quite awestruck.

Can't wait to read them.