Lovers Passed 3/3

[athousandfics]

Title: Lovers Passed part 3/3
Authors: maverick0324 and athousanderrors
Fandom: Torchwood
Characters/Pairings: Jack/Jack, Jack/Ten, Jack/Ianto, Ianto/Lisa, Gwen, Owen, Toshiko.
Word Count: 5,891 this part.
Rating: R
Summary: The past is in the past, but when time isn't linear, can anything ever really stay gone?
Spoilers: Series 1 of Torchwood.
Author's Notes: Cowriting is

Comments

[nightporters]

I LOVE this! I love the pace throughout the chapters. The very human emotions that the characters go through. Also all the characters were so well written. Lovely.

[athousanderrors]

thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. :)

[athousanderrors]

*blush* thank you.

[anonymous]

1. Guh.
2. You made plot. And Jack/Ianto. At the same time. I think I love you.

[athousanderrors]

\o/ the love is mutual, oh anonymous one. *grin*

[sandje]

oh, thank you so very much, what a wonderful gem to find:
nice, long plotty story and great characterization.
I really liked that you brought in the cybermen as the baddies, and Ianto's breakdown when confronted with them again, but then also his crazy, brave diversion moment. You had me scared there for a moment.great stuff, thanks for sharing it

[athousanderrors]

You're more than welcome - we had so much fun writing it. To the detriment of eating, sleeping, and social lives. Haha.

Glad you enjoyed reading! :)

[fatchickengirl]

Very good; the middle part very scary really thought you wld kill Ianto had to check twice for warning of character death!

Neat twist it was the original Cybermen!

[athousanderrors]

Well, technically Ianto did die... *grin*