Dragon Bait Chapter 4

Jul 31, 2009 23:53



“” =spoken words

‘’ =thoughts

Chapter 4.

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original fanfiction, dragon bait

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ayune01 August 1 2009, 08:40:28 UTC
whose tummy is that?.i bet it's Skiff's tummy.*_*

Skiff does cant be left alone. tendency to find oneself in major problem.isnt that cute?.*_*

hope to see more update soon.*_*

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charisstoma August 1 2009, 08:44:34 UTC
Darn that hungry tummy but *laughs* whose was it? Skif hasn't eaten in a while and Kieran is in a growth phase. It could be either. Judging by the fragile peace comment I think it's knight sandwich time unless Kieran opts for horse or takes a knight out of the larder and eats him elsewhere.

Bonding is coming along nicely.

Snakes when they shed are irritable. It's reasonable that dragons would be encouraged to be away from others during their rapid growth and shedding phase for a similar reason. Times of transistion are great for going out into the world and exploring before taking on adult responsibilities.

I like your world.

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awh! midnightsscream August 1 2009, 15:05:36 UTC
poor Keiran. Just when Skif is calming he gets hungry. Hopefully he'll hide his eating habits from the poor thing. Go Skif and being so resourceful that he alsmost escaped. I like that Keiran is gaining Skif's trust even though he's in dragonform. Imagine them talking when they're both people. That'll be interesting! great job!

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Re: awh! athenaartisan August 2 2009, 07:03:35 UTC
thanks i'm glad you enjoyed it

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ain0a September 15 2009, 19:50:31 UTC
this story seems really interesting, I want to read more!^^ I love the... non-human way of thinking kieran has. I think he's kind of cute in some weird, possessive way. :D

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lucklessmallory June 5 2010, 10:24:58 UTC
Ooh, the intense silence is broken with a hungry stomach! XD

I adore the way you describe Skif's feelings throughout the whole thing, even through Kieran's perspective. I love both their pov's to no end. Usually, the characters all sound alike in fics, even from different pov's. But here, they're both their own person, and it's really great. :D

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