A offering from the movie verse

Dec 04, 2004 23:59

Title: Divinity
Pairing: A/H
Rating: NC-17 I suppose, or R
Summery: After the balcony scene in Babylon in the movie.

Divinity )

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phaedrus_eros December 4 2004, 21:33:20 UTC
“Hephastion lay heavily on top of Alexander and wished he never had to hear the wet sound of their parting. Alexander arched up and back as if to follow him when he withdrew. ”

honestly it's the most sensual and moving sentence I've ever seen.

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mgunby December 4 2004, 23:47:20 UTC
I totally agree.

lovely.

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finsagainawake December 5 2004, 20:54:53 UTC
Wow! Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

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3scoremiles_10 December 4 2004, 21:54:18 UTC
“Weakness or divinity?” Alexander repeated. “Which you see in me?”
"I see both."

Ah. Now that's true.

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finsagainawake December 5 2004, 12:04:27 UTC
I think most people have a touch, at least, of both often more.

It's just very, very pronounced in this case.

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whyte_fairy December 4 2004, 23:29:10 UTC
Personally, I think that the last few lines:

"Alexander had captured his arm again, but comfortably so. Hephaistion felt his fingers tracing lines against his palm. Hephaistion’s lips briefly touched the back of his neck. “What are you dreaming?”

“Nothing,” Alexander said softly, “In this moment there is no need to dream.”

are absolutely beautiful. I want love like that.

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finsagainawake December 5 2004, 11:59:58 UTC
Ditto. I'm just not entirely sure it exists anymore.

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qaddafi December 5 2004, 11:14:21 UTC
Very sweet! I liked it.

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finsagainawake December 5 2004, 11:51:20 UTC
Thank you!

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florachan December 5 2004, 13:10:25 UTC
A sweet and sensual piece...I too loved this line:“Hephastion lay heavily on top of Alexander and wished he never had to hear the wet sound of their parting. Alexander arched up and back as if to follow him when he withdrew. ”^_^

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