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Nov 11, 2004 14:25

All for the Heir

This is a story right after Alexander's death. Roxanne decides to do something she has got to do. Perdikkas faces another dilemma.

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qaddafi November 11 2004, 06:27:54 UTC
A kinder and more humane treatment of Roxane. Thank you! Everyone always seems to bash her endlessly. It's nice to remember that she had a good side too, and did what she did for the sake of her child. She wasn't perfect, but she was hardly evil incarnate and she may well have loved Alexander in her own way. I liked it a lot.

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suetimeless November 15 2004, 22:17:50 UTC
Thanks a ton, I like writing about unexplored characters and Roxanne fitted the bill. I admire rhe fire she had, even if it did destroy some others.

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suetimeless November 15 2004, 22:19:58 UTC
I always believe everyone has a reason to act the way they do and from where they stand it is perfectly right. That's what i tried to create the real image of Roxanne. Besides Renault sees things through the eyes of Bagoas and Bagoas had his own idiosyncracies.

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florachan November 11 2004, 06:48:05 UTC
I loved your portrayal of Roxane...
I don't believe in bi-dimensional characters, and I'm pretty tired of Roxane being described as just an evil b***ch...
I might like her or not, but I'm sure there was something more about her, than that...
I loved the way you tried to describe her struggle for her child and her bitter feelings for Alexander...let's admit it, it must not have been easy to be Alexander's wife...
I liked it very much.

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suetimeless November 15 2004, 22:20:54 UTC
Thanks Flora, I like the fact that you realized it was difficult to have Alexander as a husband.

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Re: oh...roxanne suetimeless November 15 2004, 22:21:48 UTC
Thanks Nic, you made my day. Sorry for the late response, was away on one of my flights.

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