OH MY DEUS!!!!! I LOVE THE BATHROOM SCENE SO MUCH!!! It was wonderfully written and during the time I was reding it, I kept thinking someone was going to walk in on them or something. Props to you for writing this! :D
Haha, I aim to keep you in suspense ;-) Fgjsfhlkgs that's one of my least favourite scenes so aw thank you lol, I'm happy you're enjoying it all :--)) xx
iaBDAS OMG this is so AWESOME. I don't even... I wanted to go to bed at like... 1 AM and now it's 4 and, shit, I just couldn't stop reading LOL Thankfully it's a friday, aghhh. I really love how they're a little unusual, but still their own selves if you know what I mean. Like... They have both these ugly (mainly Ryan) and insecure sides to them, and yet you can understand why they act the way they do and you'd probably act the same way in their place. I think it's really hard to achieve that, especially with their vices, so you totally got my kudos for that! And well, yeah, the story is just awesome, and all the characters, man, I'm loving it. <3 GREAT JOB xxx (Ahhh, for a second there with the text messaging i was like: ohhh noooo, what if it's Jac from an unknown number to see if he's cheating on her :( But then again she couldn't have known about the deleting number and stuff, so. But there's definitely going to be some messup with his phone, I can tell (or you're just very careful not to use ANY clichés haha so omg the ANGSTTT
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Haha oh man, I hope it was worth the lack of sleep there! And wow yes thank you so much, I spent a lot of time going over their characters, the ugly parts, 'cause I wasn't sure how to present them without either being too subtle or too overboard about it idk. So yeah that's great to hear heh, thank you lots :-) I'm very glad you're enjoying it! xx
It was, it totally was! And don't worry, it came out just right ^^ And I am IMPRESSED, I finished it by now and no text-message cheating hint, way to go ;DDD
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how does a daddy long legs make a life????? kdsjlasjdflkagsafd
i cant even form words!!! this chapter was just. omgsdsad
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