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marchingsky December 12 2011, 02:03:29 UTC
This part was just perfection. The whole fight scene and the confused thoughts from Ryan; everything is just going so well <3

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at_the_c_side December 12 2011, 02:15:08 UTC
Ahhhh thank you! Glad you like it! :-) xx

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venuspontia December 12 2011, 07:41:21 UTC
LOL nice touch on the "Camisado" part :)and yeah I agree with the guy above, the fight scene was fantastic and the build up. Oh god, the build up!! I can tell the next part will be awesome!!

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at_the_c_side December 12 2011, 16:14:37 UTC
Eeeeek I wasn't sure on the whole Camisado thing, I usually don't like song drops like that so I guess that's good that you think I pulled it off hahah :-)

Aw, I'm kind of partial to the fight scene myself really ;3 Thank you lots! xx

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teralynismyname December 17 2011, 23:08:10 UTC
the whole fight scene with pete and gabe and ryan made me tear up. especially the part when ryan was like... i have it hit him i dont have a choice and how brendon was just i dare you sorta idk. that totally got to me. and the song drop! omfgskldf

and ryan's weat dream omg i loved that. its like, "oh hes getting to you and you cant deny it"

and then the whole pe thing and how ryan's like no we're not friends. 3:

lkgasjf so good!

doesn't ryan know? resistance to brendon is futile hahaha

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at_the_c_side December 17 2011, 23:19:26 UTC
Aw, well I apologise for your tears but not really because tears are pretty damn flattering ;---) Ahh I'm glad you saw that then, I spent a while thinking about how that was going to go down. And lol yeah, I usually hate song drops, but I couldn't stop myself. It had to be. :3

Oh, Ryan. So deluded. So oblivious. ;-) Thank you bb! xx

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