Diamonds, Loose: Part One

[at_the_c_side]

Comments

[marchingsky]

I'm freaking out so much because it's starting off so well and it's so intriguing!!
You're so fantastic at writing, I swear, you're seriously my top favorite writer. No joke.
The characterizations and descriptions are just fantastic.
I loved the end where you put in the freckles ahh <3 Everything is perfection as of now.
Also, you said "nonchallant" <3

[at_the_c_side]

Oh thank you so much, I'm so glad you like it. The first part is by far my least favourite, it's so bad to me ahhh.

Nonchalant is my favourite word oh my god, it crops up in this at least a hundred times i swear dklhgsd. Thank you for reading/commenting! :-) xx

[dimestorepoet]

This is so perFECT AHHHHHH AHHH I HAVE AN ENGLISH MOCK TOMORROW AMD I CAN'T STOP READING THIS OMFG?

[at_the_c_side]

AhhhhHHHH go to sleep it'll still be here tomorrow!!!!! fksjlSDGHIJGKL ThanK YOU :---) xxx

[venuspontia]

Oh wow!! I'm hooked already :D I can tell that some serious shit is goin' down with a plot like that!! Thank you so much for giving me something new to read :)

[at_the_c_side]

Haha, glad to see you're intrigued ;-) Well thank you for giving it a chance! Happy reading :-) xx

[teralynismyname]

omfgksdjfka ALISON i love that pete, william, gabe, and jon are in this too. not just spencer and brendon. LOVE THIS ALREADY!

[at_the_c_side]

Eeeeeeeeeeeee I couldn't resist putting them in there! Heh thank you lots bb :-) xx