10 words.. pomes
a beautiful girl
bows her head in reverence
to flickering light
the exhalation
is an offering of lungs
given up in wisps
ten(eleven) words: challenge inner cardinal physical matter fluid confusion separations resolve harmony discernment
The challenge lies
in the coupling
of fluid and fire
a confusion of substance
an inner flow an outer desire
both sharing one road
the discernment of which
comes not from directions
cardinals east or west
but in the harmony found
resolving the separations
between physical matter
in the north and south
I know i owe alot more random stuff.
I don't know how happy i am with the poems.. but then again when am i ever.
bows her head in reverence
to flickering light
the exhalation
is an offering of lungs
given up in wisps
ten(eleven) words: challenge inner cardinal physical matter fluid confusion separations resolve harmony discernment
The challenge lies
in the coupling
of fluid and fire
a confusion of substance
an inner flow an outer desire
both sharing one road
the discernment of which
comes not from directions
cardinals east or west
but in the harmony found
resolving the separations
between physical matter
in the north and south
I know i owe alot more random stuff.
I don't know how happy i am with the poems.. but then again when am i ever.