Favorites & Comments Because Writer's Need FeedbackcartwheelsinbedSeptember 15 2005, 02:37:26 UTC
You took the time to write it, and I took the time to read it. So I am sharing with you my favorites and my thoughts for each.
1. I feel your pain on this one. Nice to have someplace to call your own, but sad that it's just your own and no one else's. This one is simple. It leaves an impression; a memory.
2. This is my favorite! I love the description of the car as a white egg. Though the driving instructor in me makes a frown :( .
3. Too funny! This is my third favorite. :)
4. Second favorite. Very subtle. I have to reach to think about your opinion and my own on this one. Is the ritual more important, or the marriage? Your thoughts are... I'll say... orphic. I've always wanted to use that word, and it sounds pretty.
5. Touchy topic, at a loss as to what to write here.
6. Probably least favorite, but that's because it just doesn't do much.
7. Fourth favorite. It raised a titter and a teehee from me.
8. "The stress of everyday life as a place to rest." Dreadfully good.
9. I don't know you, except through this, but I feel profoundly for your experiencing this loss. I could say the usual here, express my condolences, but mere sympathy always comes out trite. Please remember to take care of yourself through this. Keep writing, if it helps. If you need someone to talk to, please feel free to chat me up.
the reply to the replyasurrealistSeptember 15 2005, 04:47:31 UTC
1. Yeah. such is life right now. I think it's good for me though.
2. Actually probably my favorite as well. If you saw my car you would know how apt the description is.
3. We all know that there's only so much family time you can deal with.
4. Orphic is a good word. The ritual is still important. But it's the the feeling that really matters.. hmm i don't know heh
5. I'm at a loss too. yet again I don't know if it has been good or bad for me. The best I can say is that I'm still growing as a person, and everything that happens is part of the process.
6. It was an uneventful day.. the recovery from the reception
7. Welcome to Arkansas, home to idiots and semi racists
8. as would have been better. I used has though heh
9. thank you and thank you. I'm just kinda putting this in the back of my head right now. I don't know how to or like to deal with this stuff well.
Lest you forget, you are awesome. Now off to bed for me. long day tomorrow.
1. I feel your pain on this one. Nice to have someplace to call your own, but sad that it's just your own and no one else's. This one is simple. It leaves an impression; a memory.
2. This is my favorite! I love the description of the car as a white egg. Though the driving instructor in me makes a frown :( .
3. Too funny! This is my third favorite. :)
4. Second favorite. Very subtle. I have to reach to think about your opinion and my own on this one. Is the ritual more important, or the marriage? Your thoughts are... I'll say... orphic. I've always wanted to use that word, and it sounds pretty.
5. Touchy topic, at a loss as to what to write here.
6. Probably least favorite, but that's because it just doesn't do much.
7. Fourth favorite. It raised a titter and a teehee from me.
8. "The stress of everyday life as a place to rest." Dreadfully good.
9. I don't know you, except through this, but I feel profoundly for your experiencing this loss. I could say the usual here, express my condolences, but mere sympathy always comes out trite. Please remember to take care of yourself through this. Keep writing, if it helps. If you need someone to talk to, please feel free to chat me up.
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2. Actually probably my favorite as well. If you saw my car you would know how apt the description is.
3. We all know that there's only so much family time you can deal with.
4. Orphic is a good word. The ritual is still important. But it's the the feeling that really matters.. hmm i don't know heh
5. I'm at a loss too. yet again I don't know if it has been good or bad for me. The best I can say is that I'm still growing as a person, and everything that happens is part of the process.
6. It was an uneventful day.. the recovery from the reception
7. Welcome to Arkansas, home to idiots and semi racists
8. as would have been better. I used has though heh
9. thank you and thank you. I'm just kinda putting this in the back of my head right now. I don't know how to or like to deal with this stuff well.
Lest you forget, you are awesome. Now off to bed for me. long day tomorrow.
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