Crossover Fic!

[astrogirl2]

OK, this is my story for Multiverse! The deadline for that is still a fair ways off, but I'm leaving on vacation in a few days, and since this is probably the last day I'll have a good block of free time to work on it, I'm polishing it up and calling it done. Not that it probably couldn't have used a little more time, really, but oh, well.

Comments

[kalypso_v]

Yes, I can see Stark might be useful practice, but this is a brilliant take on River and what she perceives in this particular 'verse. And having her see Harvey is inspired.

Couple of typos?

likes the way the swirl and sparkle

they

everything so real all the time

is?

[astrogirl2]

Aargh, thanks for pointing out the typos. You can tell I had to finish this one up in a hurry, can't you? Fixing!

I actually had to put in a little bit of effort not to make my River sound too much like my Stark, because they are very different people, even if they've both been damaged in ways that have a certain amount of similarity.

[kalypso_v]

Oh yes, she sounds quite different! But it must be useful to have experience of writing deranged and perceptive.

[astrogirl2]

There is a reason why I looked at that prompt and went, "Generally speaking, I cannot write Firefly, but, man, I bet you I can write River." :)

[kalypso_v]

The way you capture her physicality is good, too!

[astrogirl2]

Thanks! River's physicality is such an important aspect of her, I think.

(*uses icon of the other River, lacking one of this one*)

[kalypso_v]

Well, she's pretty physical too!