I'm Being Creative.... WHA!
well yesterday i bought 2 new jazz albums one by john coltrane... i just love that jazz!
anyways as i was listening to it i was thinking about how it makes me relax and forget everything although there is much more to think about.. i wrote this poem with the meaning that although the world might seem like a great place we still have our problems... i dont know why i chose to write such a pestimistic poem... in my version i talk about people blinding us from the truth of such horrible things like murder and psychopaths and stuff like that rather than what jazz does to me... well enjoy lol its my first time doing this so bear with me lol..
A Retrospect of Utopia
By: Graham
Soon we will see the light,
From the tunnel where we once had no sight.
We are blinded by the utopia of dreams,
That makes this world happier than what it seems.
Soon, we will not be lured in by this false image,
Because we will see that it is a false privilige.
We will all know the truth.
Someday.
The blindfold will be removed, and we will all see to dismay,
That the world we once knew can be bleak and grey.
The depression, the paverty, the unjust treatments to some,
Who start out good and let themselves become.
The trash of society that we don't need.
Our fathers, our mothers, sisters, and brother,
Friends, our family and many others,
Can be taken in by this evil.
Murders Psychopaths, Cheats, Liars.
This is what they could become.
And then there are the type who live normal lives
And do not let themselves transform into the beasts of humanity.
But thats what the utopia is for,
To secure the mind and soul to say its ok.
To free these feelings to let us forget this evil,
The truth will prevail this uptopia someday.
Write me back and tell me what you think...
i know it may need some adjusting here and there so give me some ideas bye !
anyways as i was listening to it i was thinking about how it makes me relax and forget everything although there is much more to think about.. i wrote this poem with the meaning that although the world might seem like a great place we still have our problems... i dont know why i chose to write such a pestimistic poem... in my version i talk about people blinding us from the truth of such horrible things like murder and psychopaths and stuff like that rather than what jazz does to me... well enjoy lol its my first time doing this so bear with me lol..
A Retrospect of Utopia
By: Graham
Soon we will see the light,
From the tunnel where we once had no sight.
We are blinded by the utopia of dreams,
That makes this world happier than what it seems.
Soon, we will not be lured in by this false image,
Because we will see that it is a false privilige.
We will all know the truth.
Someday.
The blindfold will be removed, and we will all see to dismay,
That the world we once knew can be bleak and grey.
The depression, the paverty, the unjust treatments to some,
Who start out good and let themselves become.
The trash of society that we don't need.
Our fathers, our mothers, sisters, and brother,
Friends, our family and many others,
Can be taken in by this evil.
Murders Psychopaths, Cheats, Liars.
This is what they could become.
And then there are the type who live normal lives
And do not let themselves transform into the beasts of humanity.
But thats what the utopia is for,
To secure the mind and soul to say its ok.
To free these feelings to let us forget this evil,
The truth will prevail this uptopia someday.
Write me back and tell me what you think...
i know it may need some adjusting here and there so give me some ideas bye !