417519

[astrangestorm]

Title: 417519
Rating: PG-13
Characters/Pairings: Matsumoto Jun/Sakurai Sho
Summary: Maybe the vastness of the sky serves as a reminder of how wonderful the world can be, even if things on the ground aren't.
Notes/Warnings: Written for Sho's birthday contest at sakumoto and based on the song Desert Garden by VAST. Lyrics.

Comments

[darkilk]

I just knew it!!! I'm so happy it was u wrote this. Reading it, I was going "I'd cut all my hair off if this isn't written by Jaime." Thank God my hair survives! LOL. The nuanced layering of not just characters, but the settings that are so supportive of the universes u create.

You'll ALWAYS be my writing goddess! xxxoooxxx.

[astrangerenters]

Thank you so much! I do wonder how noticeable my writing style is :)

Glad your hair is safe :)

[r_1_ss_a]

Ok. How in the world did I miss on commenting? My memory sucks. So...I knew this was yours when I saw it posted. I was confused because when we were talking you were in a different mindset. BUT OH MY GOSH. THIS IS BEYOND CREATIVITY.

I had never heard the band and song you used so I looked. And after I was just all. In freaking awe. How does your brain do that every time? I have told you time and time again how I'm in awe of your brain.

I like Jun in here. How at first he was all, I don't care but then he does. When Sho looks at his hands...heartbreaking. And the MASTURBATING STARS. ONLY YOU. YOU.

This was so awesome. I always love reading what your imagination gives us! <3 Thanks dude.

[astrangerenters]

Probs because you commented on email ;)

I had fun trying something different for them here. Music's a powerful inspiration - you never know where it'll take you!

[rinalin]

This is so rich and fulfilling. You are always so fantastic in creating and crafting a world that sucks you in. I'm forever in awe.

[astrangerenters]

Thank you so much! What a nice comment, I appreciate it :)

[gomushroom]

Didn't comment over there, but I cannot not skip this. It was a treat to read. :D You created a beautiful universe here with all the slow pace and tension building, oh, your AU ♥!

[astrangerenters]

Thank you! I am surprised by how I managed to get THIS out of that song, but I'm always surprising myself :)

[mynamelessname]

The vivid details of the world you created here are really excellent (if heartbreaking) and the little bits of humor created a perfect balance. I really enjoyed reading this. <3

[astrangerenters]

Thank you! There needed to be a touch of humor in this - I'd have depressed myself otherwise :)