i hear your sighs, i hear your heartbeat pounding on my back.

[astonish]

title: treat your life like a tragedy
pairing: cristiano ronaldo/ruud van nistelrooy (cristiano ronaldo/other)
rating: nc-17
warnings: prostitution, mentioned violence.
notes: for mina_pak, who asked for something else and got this instead.

Comments

[blackdracaena]

Whoa! This was intense. Left me totally stunned. I already loved your last R/R but this one tops it.

And the idea/plot... I love it to pieces. There is so much about this fic that I love that I really don't know where to start. Most of all I adore your writing style. All those little details, the way you capture everything and bring it alive. Ruud's thoughts and emotions feel so real. And I really really can't put my thoughts into feedback the way I want to because I'm still incoherent.

To sum it up brilliant fic... gorgeous writing. This one goes into my memories just like the last one.

Definitely hoping there will be more of these two from you in the future. ♥

[astonish]

thank you. glad you liked the plot, since let me tell you, this thing got a hold of my ankle and just wouldn't let go no matter what i did. i didn't have a choice in writing it, it just demanded to be done. so i'm happy it seemed to turn out okay. i wasn't sure there for a while.

but yes, thanks again. i appreciate your comments, incoherent or not. :**

[miman]

I wanted it to never end, never stop. This was intense and perfect.

[astonish]

aw, thanks. so if i were to write a companion piece to this, you'd read it? i've just got the idea in my head and wanted to see if anyone was interested. this story is taking over my brain. :)

[miman]

Yes, please. This story was absolutely haunting. I would like to read a companion piece very much.

[leetje]

Ah snap, you made me cry at work. *weeps some more*

Oh I just love your characterisation of Ruud, struggling with his feelings, trying to do what is best... just perfect. And Ronnie... *sighs*

Brialliant fic and now I'm all upset there's no happy ending. *woes for OTP*

Please, please write more? :)

[astonish]

uh oh! sorry about that. but i'm happy it affected you so, though i'm not sure crying at work is all that good. :) thank you for the feedback, dear.

[niamh_x]

Aw, I really do love how you write. Thank you for another masterpiece! :-)

This is beautiful and tragic all at once. I love it completely. The fact that you've captured Ruud's feelings so well, and so painfully, is really special. He's so confused...and it's all such an emotional pain...truly wonderful how you've written it :-)

"You can take what you like as long as you pay, isn't that how it works?"

-cries- Yeah, I remember that feeling :-(

[winter_solstice]

that is so nice, yet so sad.
:(