Fic: Revelations, Chapter 13: Tony (Avengers, WIP)

[astolat]

Here’s the new chapter at last!

Chapter 13: Tony 
How did anyone sleep when you’d just broken the laws of the universe?

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Revelations (37,446 words) by astolat

Comments

[akatsuki210]

Wow, this fic just keeps getting more and more amazing. LOL at the comment about Tony's mental note not to insult an Asgardian woman's virtue (good thing he didn't comment about the view of the Valkyries at eye level, huh?).

The part with Steve was so touching. I feel like Bruce's "price" might actually turn out to be a positive thing, though. I mean, he himself describes the Hulk as being like a two-year-old, and what two-year-old wouldn't be an absolute hellion without any parental supervision? But if Bruce can mentally talk to the Hulk now, he might be able to act as a parent to him and gradually teach him to not be so destructive.

I'm not entirely clear about what's going on with Tony. It seems like he has some magical ability now, but there's also something going on with his arc reactor?

I'm slightly embarrassed that I didn't pick up on the thing about Loki only pretending to be Thor until it was explained by Tony and Natasha.

This whole sentence made me LOL: "The last few tendrils were pulling out of Loki's body and going into Thor's, being as far as Tony was concerned uneccessarily sluggish about the whole thing; and that was even before Thor reached down and heaved Loki up onto him." You know what would be hilarious? If the make-out session wasn't actually neccessary to put Thor's soul back, and Loki was just doing it because he knew it would squick out the Avengers (and Thor doing it because he was only half-conscious and didn't realize there were other people around).