*FIC: Beauty*

[asterie_smiles]

DARK! DARK! DARK! DARK!

Beauty
by S_Star

Disclaimer: If Rowling knew what I was doing to her creations in this little fic, my head would probably be on a pike outside the gates to her mansion. We can deduce from this that I am not Rowling and do not own the characters. Or the mansion.
Pairing: H/D
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Sex, blood and a

Comments

[shadafakup]

Nonononono. It wasn't twisted - it was prefection.

Dearie, I LOVED this. *cough* but yeah, it was like omgomgomgomgomg.

I don't know, but somehow the paragraph length really struck me. I mean, it was short, then it got longer and longer, and then there was this abrupt two lines, and it ended in that one word. Maybe I was just over-thinking but yeah. It seemed to have significance. As Draco grew more psychotic, the words seem to tumble over wonderfully.

*shivers* I loved the whole feel of it, the whole sound of it, and the way it flowed. It was like falling into this spiral of the darkess emotions that plague us, even as we don't notice.

Cutting out the dark mark. My god, I loved that bit. The insanity of both boys were wonderfully done.

"fucks him gently for the first time before obsessively arranging him on the scarlet sheets, his torso a masterpiece in itself with lines and bruises that don’t heal and all the colours of his lust, his obsession."

I adored that line. It was well crafted I was specchless.

*hugs* You write too well.

*skips off to read it again*

~Shadafakup

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*huggles* Thank you SO, SO much! Your reviews always amaze me so much, they're so lovely and so insightful! Thank you!