AC2 Fic: Poison, A Doctor & A Frantic Ezio

[assassin_lucy]

So after a couple of people had suggested it, I decided to give it a shot. It's not my best work, I'll proofread it properly later >_>

EDIT: So I think I've caught most of the problems.

Title: Poison, A Doctor & A Frantic Ezio
Prequel (of sorts) to Monteriggioni
Characters: Leonardo/Ezio
Summary: After yet another victory, Ezio decides to

Comments

[yumearashi]

I read this last night, but had to wait for the morning to comment so I could do it properly...

Ezio's so in denial about is feelings for Leo. It's just because of Leo's help that he went there instead of partying with the thieves. Suuuuuure...

I can so see Leo as an affectionate drunk. And considering that I can see Ezio as an uninhibited drunk, I would expect that could make things very interesting ^o^

Aww, just-woken sleepy Leo! So cute!

"It was a sign that Leonardo had been busy, and when Leonardo was busy, it meant he was happy." That is so true! I simply cannot imagine Leo doing nothing.

I like the attention and detail you've given to writing the doctor, rather than just having him be a throwaway cameo.

Aww, Leo's sleepy mumbled request for more sleep and Ezio's sheer joy!! So adorable!

editorial notes - Looks like you had a bit of finger dyslexia, you've got 'Leoanrdo' in there a few times. Your formatting's a bit unusual, did you mean to leave out the spacing between paragraphs?

[assassin_lucy]

Denial is always fun. In my mind, this is about when he's starting to realise he thinks more of Leo than he should, but isn't willing to admit it means anything.

Ezio's either uninhibited or sulky. Either one would work with an affectionate Leonardo.

As for the doctor, I couldn't stand to turn him into a plot device.

Ugh. This is what happens when I'm not watching what I type. I thought I'd caught most of the "Leoanrdo"s, but apparently not. And no, I didn't mean to leave out the spacing. It's copy-pasted from a word document on my USB, it looked fine there... I'll get to editing it.

[yumearashi]

*nods* makes sense

*laughs* now I have a mental image of drunken!sullen!Ezio with a happy!snuggly!drunk!Leo hanging off his arm ^o^

Good for you ^__^

*huggles* typos happen. And so do formatting weirdities.

[assassin_lucy]

Now I'm getting plot ideas from drunken Ezio and Leonardo.

[yumearashi]

Yay I have spawned plotbunnies! ^o^

[assassin_lucy]

I'm messing around with it already, despite that I've got a handwritten Desmond/Shaun lurking in my room. I swear, plotbunnies will be the death of me.

[yumearashi]

Is it bad of me to be happy that you're writing it anyway? ^.^; I was hoping to work on a plotbunny earlier today, but the muses just weren't cooperating >.

[assassin_lucy]

Probably, but who cares? XD It's fun.

[yumearashi]

*laughs* so true!

[assassin_lucy]

Sulky!drunk!Ezio is becoming jealous of Antonio, and trying to insult him using assonance. It's not working, as I can't think of any "_________ Antonio" insults starting with A.

[yumearashi]

*laughs* Oh man, if they were all drunk and Antonio started hitting on affectionate!drunk!Leo! ^o^

[assassin_lucy]

At this point, he's not even doing that! Leo's kind of leaning on him, but not flirting, and Ezio's sulking in a corner, trying to come up with witty insults. Rosa's there too, but at this point, I think she may have fallen over from laughing at them.

[yumearashi]

*laughs* She so would have ^_^