Fic: Up to Something

[mysecretashes]

Title: Up to Something
Author: dreamdustmama 
Summary: Albus has a date, and James is determined to find out who it is.
Word Count: 2952
Rating: PG-13 for language and a bit of boy!kissing (obviously).
Genre: Humor, Romance
Prompts: Person: James Potter II; Place: Carnival; Object One: Tunnel of Love; Object Two: Ticket; Food: Candy Floss; Emotion: Joy; Freeform: Win

Comments

[mysecretashes]

Haha, thank you! :D I'm glad you thought it was funny!

[ladyannikaa]

LOL Too cute!!

[mysecretashes]

Thank you! :D

[duck_or_rabbit]

Oh, the kiss was so wonderfully teenaged! And, um, so was James, lol.

This was hilarious:

Lily stared. “Let me get this straight,” she said slowly. “Albus told you he’s going to the carnival with Scorpius, but you still want to follow him and find out who his date is?”

“Um. Yes,” James said, confused by her tone.

You've such a nice sense of balance in your writing style. I don't know exactly how to articulate that further, so just accept my nonsense as a compliment.

[mysecretashes]

Yay! 'Teenaged' was exactly what I was going for. :D Lol, thank you! 'Balance' is a very nice compliment. :D

[clovermews]

Hahaha brilliant! I loved all three of them. Fab job!

[mysecretashes]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. :D

[asnowyowl]

LOL! So funny! I loved all your characterizations. Very well written.

[mysecretashes]

Thank you! :D

p.s. Every time I see your icon I just want to stare and drool.