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Fic: (WiP Chapter One) The Summer Al Tried to Live

Jun 09, 2009 10:04

Author: asnowyowl
Title: The Summer Al Began Tried to Live: Chapter 1
Pairing: Eventual Albus Severus/Scorpius
Summary: In the summer before college, Al Potter finally begins living, but can he find the courage to show his family who he really is?
Warnings: None in this chapter
Rating: This chapter: PG13 for language (eventual NC17)
Beta: bk7brokemybrain
Word Count: 1877 ( Read more... )

object: ticket, object: tunnel of love, food: cotton candy, freeform win or lose, fic, emotion: joy, place: carnival, person: james potter

Comments 31

tree_faerie_me June 9 2009, 15:28:47 UTC

I read that this was set in America and for a little while my heart sunk. But after soldiering on I'm converted! :D
I can't wait for the next chapter :)

asnowyowl June 9 2009, 17:26:26 UTC

Thanks for reading! As I was writing this chapter, I was thinking no one's going to read this-- non magic AU, set in the U.S. and WiP. So, I'm really thankful to anyone who takes a chance on this one.

tree_faerie_me June 9 2009, 17:30:55 UTC

well it's always nice to read something different, the fact that it's well written just makes the story so much better :).
Don't worry about it!!

asnowyowl June 9 2009, 18:52:02 UTC

thanks so much for the kind words!

psuedo_catalyst June 9 2009, 15:57:35 UTC

Well, you've just about made my life, since in the past few months I've become a fervent fan of AUs. I haven't gotten into any HP ones yet, but it looks like that's changing as we speak... great first chapter!

asnowyowl June 9 2009, 17:27:06 UTC

Thanks! I adore non-magic AU's (it was a Snarry fic that converted me). Thanks so much for reading and commenting!

eerisedda June 9 2009, 18:13:38 UTC

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

It's so cute. I don't normally like AUs set in America where the characters aren't British, but it's so cute. haha. It's so weird hearing Scorpius called Corey.

I look forward to the next installment!

asnowyowl June 9 2009, 18:53:03 UTC

Thanks! I knew I was taking a chance writing it as non magic AU in America, but this fic's been brewing in my mind for a LONG time. I'm glad you gave it a chance.

eerised_da June 9 2009, 19:06:27 UTC

haha. Of course! Gotta support my fellow carnival goers! ;)

And it's really good! You're a talented writer! I really do look forward to the next installment!

asnowyowl June 9 2009, 19:36:45 UTC

*nods* Yes, I've promised myself I'll read all the carnival entries--so support here, too.

thanks so much for the compliments!

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asnowyowl June 9 2009, 18:53:27 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you gave it a chance!

phoenix_xd June 9 2009, 18:37:25 UTC

well, i usually never read author's notes or warnings...
so i didn't know what to expect reading this xD

eeek, i loved it!
haha, can't wait for the rest :D

asnowyowl June 9 2009, 18:54:02 UTC

Thank you!! Yeah, this one might take you a bit off guard if you don't know what's coming.