Dec 27, 2004 14:36
ok i kinda right poetry so heres my latest poem read it and leave me a comment telling me what u think bout it.
My Love
how do you do it keep your beauty i mean
if only i could then i might be seen
i wonder and wonder without an end
but it turns out it was just around the bend
yes around the bend and i found you
standing there without a clue
wondering wondering what you were thinking
just then i thought ny heart is sinking
sinking it was a bottomless pit
a hole of love i would admit
it was a never ending fall which had no stop
no sound at all not even a pop
but then i heard a voice what a beautiful sound
it was so sweet then i hit the ground
i looked up then i gazed in your eyes
the puddles of blue had me mezmorized
your eyes are like diamonds their shiny and cute
and i tried acting cool but then i tripped over a root
you started laughing then started to blush
my heart was racing my mind was in a rush
i tried saying hello but it didnt really come out right
i was staring and baffling it was a really funny sight
you thought i was crazy but in a cool way
just then you looked down and started to say
"your just my type funny and sweet"
i felt good i got up to my feet
i grasped your hand and said "daniellas my name"
"i thihnk i love you hope you feel the same."