Fic: Indecent Proposal

[the_girl_20]

So, I'm doing this 28 Flavours of Scribbs challenge thingie...and I forgot to post the responses here. Doh! Three fics coming up. Should tide us over a wee bit. Fic has been thin on the ground of late...are you all too busy with your ficathon entries? :)

Title: Indecent Proposal
Rating: PG-13
Prompt(s): Jealous Scribbs + Kick-ass Scribbs

Comments

[debonisa]

I absolutely loved it! I giggled all the way through! My favorite bit was the blurting out of "Jesus that was sexy!" Nice touch! This was a wonderful start to my afternoon!

Love,

Amy

[the_girl_20]

My favorite bit was the blurting out of "Jesus that was sexy!"

Strangely, that was the only bit I had in my head when I started this. It was all built round that ;) Glad you giggled!

[wonkots42]

Ha! That was excellent. I bet Tesco is responsible for many a break up - you should see my parents shopping. "How about this?" "Is it low fat?" "No, it's tasty." "Oh for god's sake, you know I'm on diet" and so on and so forth.

Aaaaah...where was I? Oh yeah, well done!

[the_girl_20]

My mum refuses to take my dad shopping. He sneaks things into the trolley that she doesn't approve of and eats the grapes on the way round.

Glad you enjoyed ;)

[mondoshawan555]

Greatness! "Jesus that was sexy" was my favorite bit too, totally did not see that coming. And I have no doubt it was very sexy :-P
Thanks for writing.

[the_girl_20]

Action!Scribbs is always sexy. Glad you liked.

[ralst]

Loved that one, especially Scribbs' acknowledgement that Sullivan was a good guy but she'd still be forced to think of him as a complete bastard for marrying her lady.

[the_girl_20]

Poor Sullivan, it's a no-win situation. Glad you liked it.

[yukivampyra]

Haha! I loved the "Jesus that was sexy" line. This was great.

[the_girl_20]

I totally saw it as one of Ash's inappropriate and embarrassing faux pas. Glad you liked.