FIC: "Girlfriend in a Coma," PG

Apr 19, 2007 20:14

Title: Girlfriend in a Coma
Author: geonncannon
Word Count: 3,294
Category: Drama
Disclaimer: No one within belongs to me!
Rating: PG
Summary: Ash and Scribbs investigate a death that left a bystander in a coma.
Girlfriend in a Coma )

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hirai April 20 2007, 02:06:33 UTC
Aw, that was great. I can totally imagine Ash jumping in front of a bullet for Scribbs.

Knife, maybe a gun, no, I think I'll use a fifty-year-old nanny. *snickers*

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geonncannon April 20 2007, 02:13:30 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it :D

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the_girl_20 April 20 2007, 21:24:24 UTC
Ash looked up and said, "Emma," just before she went through the kitchen door. When Scribbs turned, Ash said, "I'd be there."

*dreamy smile*

Awww, I do love protective Ash.

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geonncannon April 21 2007, 01:20:54 UTC
Heee, me too! And glad you liked it!

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textfiend April 20 2007, 22:08:39 UTC
You: The day Eleanor Winchester fell from the sky...
Me: Woohoo, new fic!
You: Right on top of Denise Wesson.
Me: Hmmm. Winchester, and now Wesson.
You: "Amanda Smith," the woman said.
Me: Ha. Who's next? Colt?
You: Eleanor Winchester was nanny for Gregory and Michelle Colt
Me: There's going to be a gun at the end of this story, isn't there?

Nicely done. You know what they say about the gun in the first act. :)

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geonncannon April 21 2007, 01:21:44 UTC
*laughs* I think it was ralst who said something about not giving Scribbs a gun that planted the idea in my head. ;-D Glad you liked it!

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crimsonwhisper April 21 2007, 11:51:18 UTC
really, nanny's are all the rage for the modern day murderer. hehe...good story.

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geonncannon April 21 2007, 16:16:11 UTC
Oh, absolutely. I'm surprised it's not all over the news! ;-D

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geonncannon April 21 2007, 16:17:02 UTC
Thanks! I tried to get all the stuff I loved about the series in there with just a bit more slash than the episodes gave us. Which was actually hard without putting in a full-blown sex scene ;-D

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