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cruiscin_lan December 5 2008, 04:51:03 UTC
Wow, reading this makes me kind of hungry.... Love it :)

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ashesfor_trees December 5 2008, 04:54:28 UTC
haha, I know! all the ice cream and popcorn and waffles, right?

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cruiscin_lan December 5 2008, 15:58:14 UTC
I was going to mention it while beta-ing, but I had to get a snack instead. :P

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paper_cranes January 4 2009, 03:30:41 UTC
lol comment ftw!!

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dragynflies December 5 2008, 05:02:52 UTC
Oh man, I was gonna give this challenge a shot, but there's no topping this one.

The last one was my absolute favorite but I loved them all SO much.

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ashesfor_trees December 5 2008, 05:05:55 UTC
I... don't know what to say to that! Thank you, so much!
please give the challenge a shot :) I totally want to see what you think :)

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liz_will_ow December 5 2008, 05:06:26 UTC
Love it! *Especially* the ending. And it's okay that it doesn't have the dream stuff. I say "Blah" to the dream stuff. This is so much more relatable anyway.

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ashesfor_trees December 5 2008, 05:10:52 UTC
haha, I was writing all the sappy stuff and I thought, "I really want something sexy towards the end!"

I asked my roommate what they should do and she was like "um... costumes?" so i went with lingerie :p

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liz_will_ow December 5 2008, 05:21:48 UTC
Oh no, I meant the "You're hurting me" and "I know" parts--it just seemed so frighteningly shocking after the list.

But! Yes, my favorite of the list is the last one. :p

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ashesfor_trees December 5 2008, 05:24:04 UTC
...yes... that's what I meant as well...
:p sorry, I get my wires crossed sometimes.

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ashesfor_trees December 5 2008, 05:11:20 UTC
bahaha! how did you know? that was my plan all along!

(ps I love your icon :p)

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catyuy December 5 2008, 05:11:43 UTC
Oh...this is lovely.
And now I just want more of what you think thet've never done.

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