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ashedrake

FIC: For Heroes Fic Exchange and Taki:)

May 28, 2009 16:15

Title: Pebbles
Recipient: takhallus
Characters/Pairings: Luke/Lyle
Rating: NC-17
Wordcount: 7116
Spoilers: To be on the safe side pretty much all of third season before the finale.
Warnings: Sex. Some swearing. Luke’s 17 and for the purpose of this fic so is Lyle.
Disclaimer: Heroes belongs to Tim Kring, NBC et al
Also archived at and x-posted to: Heroes ( Read more... )

character: lyle bennet, pairing: luke/lyle, fandom: heroes, fic:heroes, character: luke campbell, challenge: heroes fic exchange, rating: nc-17, bicharacter: sylar

Comments 6

_profiterole_ May 29 2009, 20:51:31 UTC

Awww~, that was so cute! :-) I ♥ this pairing.

ashedrake May 30 2009, 09:17:57 UTC

Thank you! And thanks for commenting:)

tea_42 June 14 2009, 17:21:54 UTC

I LOVED this story. It felt so real. So the agent chasing Luke was Sylar right? I love that, it ties the story back into what's happening in the rest of the universe, and makes it feel that much more authentic. And Sylar totally would just let Luke go. Anyway, this fic was great, I hope to see more of this pairing from you, like if Mr. Bennet finds out about his son and Sylar's protege, because unlike Lyle, he'd know all about Luke's past and wouldn't want his son anywhere near the delinquent psycho in training.

ashedrake June 15 2009, 16:51:25 UTC

Thank you! And yes, yes, he was! Can't have Luke without a tiny dash of Sylar.
I definitely want to write more fic with these two, maybe with Bennet or... I think Sylar might've been intrigued enough to come back later maybe? But on the other hand I want them to be happy,'cause I started to feel for them, y'know, and any more fics would be so angsty they'd hurt.
Thanks so much for the lovely comment!

tea_42 June 15 2009, 18:15:24 UTC

Angst can be fun, especially when it's forces trying to pull the lovers apart angst that ends with love concurring all <3. Angst makes the fluff sweeter.

I also would love to see more of Lyle's relationship with his father explored, I've always said, Mr. Muggles gets more love and attention in that family, and it must be so hard having a dad who's life revolves around work and every family member except you...poor Lyle. So if Bennit finally decides to notice his son enough to intervene with his relationship with Luke, I could totally see rebellious angry Lyle.

But it's your fic, and as such, it's whatever you want. Although Sylar is love, so more of Sylar showing up always makes me happy.

ashedrake June 15 2009, 19:55:02 UTC

Flangst is win! <3

I could really see that happen. I'll put the bunny in the garden with the rest of them:D