p r o j e c t e x o : chapter four ⇢ authors: illegiblesigns and mouthwash ⇢ fandom: exo ⇢ pairings: various ⇢ 7751 words ⇢ pg-13 (possible disturbing content)
I know I'm a horrible person because I didn't comment on your previous chapter, so I'll make sure I leave a wondrous message with lovely feels now. First things first, I absolutely love, love, love the fact that HunHan has progressed so nicely since we've last seen them. Secondly, like the comment above mine says, Chanyeol is a jerk face. You do not, under any damn circumstance, reject someone's love for you if you feel the same way! Overall, I absolutely love this chapter, because I feel like General Changmin really loves Sehun - the entire eye bags bit really made my heart warm for the very fact that he cares for Sehun in such a fatherly-son way. And about the escape - about time! I'm here waiting, hoping they'd do it already and finally, the plan is set! I have a feeling Suho should tell Lay, because Lay is amazing and even refused orders for Suho's own health! Now if only we can get Chanyeol to help and stop being such a little, pardon my French, pussy. He is a big vagina. Yes. He is.
Okay, now that I'm done ranting, I want to say that I love the vintage style you've put into this piece. The cars, the club - OMFG - the agents from Kronos! Ahhhhh! I love super agent stuff, which is why you need to write more here about Tao! Now, I know I may be ahead of myself, but Tao needs to be shipped with Kris. I have read enough fanfics that Kris is always the one saving Tao, because he just seems like such a damsel to people. But seriously, Tao needs to save Kris now. Why; because Tao knows martial arts of the Olden World and he needs to shine as the knight instead of his prissy roles!
Well... That was a REALLY long post. All in all, I thoroughly enjoy your works and I am really looking forward to the next chapter, because this entire piece, your baby, your monster - is alive and it's monstrosity is so beautiful. And that is a wrap from myself, have a good night/day, whenever you read this piece of nonsense. :P
Your comments always make me extremely emotional, seriously. I don't think people can quite understand how much this fic means for both me and Fernanda (hours and hours writing, planning, fangirling, screaming at each other that no this not gonna work, going crazy, staying up until two in the morning reading the whole chapter until we're actually satisfied), so, whenever I read comments like yours I get really really proud of what we've done. Thanks a lot, sweetie! I hope you keep enjoying the fic until its end :)
Okay, now that I'm done ranting, I want to say that I love the vintage style you've put into this piece. The cars, the club - OMFG - the agents from Kronos! Ahhhhh! I love super agent stuff, which is why you need to write more here about Tao! Now, I know I may be ahead of myself, but Tao needs to be shipped with Kris. I have read enough fanfics that Kris is always the one saving Tao, because he just seems like such a damsel to people. But seriously, Tao needs to save Kris now. Why; because Tao knows martial arts of the Olden World and he needs to shine as the knight instead of his prissy roles!
Well... That was a REALLY long post. All in all, I thoroughly enjoy your works and I am really looking forward to the next chapter, because this entire piece, your baby, your monster - is alive and it's monstrosity is so beautiful. And that is a wrap from myself, have a good night/day, whenever you read this piece of nonsense. :P
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I don't think people can quite understand how much this fic means for both me and Fernanda (hours and hours writing, planning, fangirling, screaming at each other that no this not gonna work, going crazy, staying up until two in the morning reading the whole chapter until we're actually satisfied), so, whenever I read comments like yours I get really really proud of what we've done.
Thanks a lot, sweetie! I hope you keep enjoying the fic until its end :)
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