Comments | aseagulliniowa: you'll take your steps away with hesitance

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you'll take your steps away with hesitance

Aug 24, 2010 22:35

Title: you'll take your steps away with hesitance
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Sam, Dean
Word Count: 1,975
Summary: Sam doesn't talk about Ava; this is so far from normal Sam behavior, Dean wonders if he should circle back to the Blue Rose Motel and check under the beds for pods.
A/N: Written for summer_sam_love. Title from "Cautioners" by Jimmy Eat World.

( you'll take your steps away with hesitance )

pairing: none, character: dean winchester, fandom: supernatural, character: sam winchester

Comments 13

cece_away August 25 2010, 03:14:16 UTC

This is really good. You have the brother's personalities, their tones and movements spot on. Great little story.

Hate Gordon. Didn't miss him in this at all.

mlebayre August 25 2010, 04:03:23 UTC

Very nice. This is one of my favorite episodes and I loved this tag.

borgmama1of5 August 25 2010, 04:40:36 UTC

Great tag. Loved Dean's big brotherliness!

harrigan August 25 2010, 10:22:34 UTC

Very nicely written!

I'd almost forgotten that Sam had taken a walloping at Gordon's hands and Dean had been so solicitous, checking him out as soon as he was freed. You capture that continuing behavior very well here. With a nice foreshadowing that Ava could have turned-...

This just fits so snugly into canon!

scullspeare August 26 2010, 02:21:10 UTC

The brothers talking - that's always good; when they listen to each other, as they do here, it's even better.

This missing scene is a great fit with the episode. While the show alluded to how heavily Ava's disappearance weighed on Sam, it's great to see it fully illustrated here - and totally in character.

Awesome job!