Fic: les quatre saisons [lost; daniel/charlotte]

[oregonblondie]

les quatre saisons
lost, daniel/charlotte (naomi, miles, frank).
482 words, rated pg.
spoilers for season 4.
oxford 1996, island

a dark figure skitters in the distance, almost slips, regains; 31 minutes late.

he remarks on the ice, on it matching her eyes; his breath warms her pink nose. her marks are slipping.

Comments

[crickets]

Oh my goodness! I love every word of this! You are fantastic! Just lovely!

[aurorawest]

This is incredible. When I finished reading I had to just sit still for a moment and let your beautiful words wash over me. I really love how atmospheric your style of writing is. Thanks for what is now my favourite Dan/Charlotte fic. :)

And yep, definitely the same icon. ;)

[falseeeyelashes]

“I’m Daniel.” he bites his lip, then adds a post script, “Faraday”.

I can picture that so, so perfectly in my mind.

Well done, you! This is very eloquent and atmospheric and that ending! Nicely done :D

[ashlibrooke]

Loved it. Absolutely loved it.

It is amazing. And you have written Charlotte so perfectly. The tattoo. Autumn. It's completely perfect.

And Daniel... *sigh*

I really enjoyed this. Thank you.

[danlotteshipper]

Wow! I'm a little late, but I just now found this (don't know how I missed it in the first place, though). And I realized that it's pretty much amazing. Wonderful job. =) It was so... poetic? Not sure how to describe it, but it was loverly.