ookkayy...really, really bad Moon Child-fic

Jun 25, 2005 03:34

...Ookkkaayy then. Apparently, I'm trying to write Moon Child fic. Gackt, please get your character out of my head. I really don't need him there. Nor do I really need Hyde. No, really. Seriously. I don't care if he's angsty/hot vampire. (yes, yes I do)
...Okay. I lost. Ahaha.



Kei:

His memories are often blurred and scattered. Like old photographs, he's filed them away over the centuries until he can no longer tell the difference between one and the other. Of course, there are those he's kept carefully locked away, but nevertheless rise again and again to haunt him.

His first victim, struggling, dying, dead in his arms as blood slides down his chin.

Luka's dark figure engulfed in flickering flames as the sun inevitably rises.

Some, he's kept close so he won't forget. Never.

One he's kept close is Sho's smile. Actually, he's kept many, many of Sho's smiles. Each and every one, however, are in perfect condition.

One of the clearest memories in his mind is Sho's little hands running through his hair.

"You should cut it," Sho is saying over the city's shouts and cries. Mallepa's night is much like its day. Lights, lights, everywhere as people swarm from one place to the next. Endless, ceaseless sound.

"Maybe," he remembers replying.

"It'll get dirty if you don't. It's dirty -now-." Sho continues insistently as his fingers wage a war against his gnarly tangles.

"And yours isn't?"

A temporary truce occurs as Sho's fingers come to a stop.

This truce abruptly and violently ends with a sharp tug through his hair.

"Ow! FUCK! YOU--" He spins around angrily.

But Sho is laughing, Sho is smiling and then he's not entirely sure what he's angry about anymore.

Soooo mmannnyy plot holes in this movie~~ I mean, as an Asian gangster movie, it's -okay-. I've seen some really, really pointless wtf-OOKKAAAYYY THEN ones and Moon Child wasn't one of them. Some parts actually made sense, but then...the movie SKIPS like the five most important years! What happened to make Kei leave? Exactly -why- does Sun join up with the gang that RAPED HIS SISTER? And okay, -how- does Sho make money and get his own gang? WHHHAAAT? Apparently, there's a novel that Gackt wrote about that time.

Arrgghh. I wannnntt iiitt (in Chinese)! (i also want the Platinum Boxes cause they appear to be shiny and omg, footage! pictures! music videos that I can't get ahold of! AARRGHH I WANNNTTT) It'd be pointless if I got it in Japanese since I can't READ!

OH WELL TO SLEEP NOW.

moon child, fic

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