freality

Dec 25, 2010 15:09

There a world out there ---->
that;s fill fa filled with fear
they try and say its fine
if you don't go too near

are you still trying to adhere
it can all be replaced
with a simple substituted space
clearly it's not falling into place
your eyes still linger
drawing energy
what a waste of time
to sit on the finish line

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adamchristopher December 26 2010, 03:14:48 UTC
favorite part: "blow past words and opposititions, strangely stitched to dampen whispers."

it's very good to hear/see from you. hope all is well in the vince kingdom.

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arzele December 26 2010, 22:06:51 UTC
Thanks, that was the only line that I got caught on and had to rewrite.

This is the second time, where you mentioned explicitly that your favorite line was the one I thought fit the least.

I don't write as often as I used to, but I spin fire now as a hobby, which has been filling lots of my time :)

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Elect tune in to advantage and olph dreaded which leads ears were rupt. anonymous January 12 2011, 20:26:48 UTC
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