Fic: Thunder Rises; Chapter One: Lost; Rated PG-13

[arytra]

This is the first chapter for my claim on prau100. Enjoy

Comments

[megthelegend]

EEEEEEE. OH NO. TOMMY AND HAYLEY! TOGETHER FOREVER IN PR HEAVEN! (where there's lots of smoothies, no alcomahol, and wardrobes FULL of clothes in just one colour).

Very interesting & realistic impacts on the other four. I like the hints of post-apocalyptic OT4ness you've got in this. Very much looking forward to reading more, and seeing the TF stuff, when you're ready. :) Well done!

[arytra]

Don't forget that you can't swear or say "killed" in PR Heaven.

Thanks, Meg. Nothing like death and destruction to bring people together. I'm working on it the best I can and I'm hoping to get more out soon. Thanks again!

[rivulet027]

Oh wow. It's all dire and now I'm all worried for them. Tommy and Hayley? No wonder their all so messed up...to lose one would've been bad, but to lose them both...This is just wow. Can't wait to see where you're going with this!

[arytra]

Thanks! That's what I was going for so I'm glad it's working. I'll try to write more soon!

[rivulet027]

:) And I'll look forward to reading it...lol.

[moonlite_n_rose]

Wow... this was amazing. Everything that could go wrong did go wrong. They lost Tommy and Hayley and they are losing the city. I feel for them.

[arytra]

Thank you!