Perfect Girl Evolution *CHAPTER EIGHT*
Title : Perfect Girl Evolution
Author : tHeRED BunnY+penguin
Type : Multi-chapters
Status : On-going
Chapter : 8
Genre : Comedy, Angst, Drama, Romance
Rated : PG-13
Warnings : Un-beta… Gender Switch!! A lot of Grammar Mistake!!
Theme Song : SUPER JUNIOR - Shining Star
Disclaimer : I don’t own them, just this fic! This fic is inspired by Japanese manga Perfect Girl Evolution/ヤマトナデシコ七変化 ‘Yamato Nadeshiko Shichi Henge’.
Summary : Hyukjae, Kyuhyun, Chansung and Nichkhun are beautiful, handsome, young men living in a huge mansion. One day, their landlord, whom they call “Auntie Victoria”, asks them a favor to make her niece, Donghae, who’s going to be living with them, into a respectable young lady. She agrees to make their living expenses free of charge if they succeed, but if they fail, she’ll triple their rent. Due to their confidence in knowing how to deal with women, they agree, but once they meet Donghae, they begin to realize that their lovely living arrangements may soon be in jeopardy. But, along the task, Hyukjae had fallen in love with Donghae…
CHAPTER EIGHT
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Still at the restaurant..
“My future husband..” Donghae confused why so sudden. "Nice to meet you, Princess.” Siwon kissed Donghae back hand and smiled to her. Donghae melted with Siwon smile and she smiled too. Her face become red and she hide her face in her mother shoulder.
“Hyukjae, she have been took by someone else. Poor you, Hyukjae.” Chansung said and Hyukjae immediately sat on the chair and waited for the lunch. Ingnoring the situation occur now. “Hyukjae, control yourself.” Nichkhun whispered to him. Hyukjae just keep silent.
“Let’s sit..” Victoria said and all of them sat on their seat. The tables is round tables. Start with Hankyung, besides him is Heechul, Siwon, Hyukjae, Chansung, Kyuhyun, Nichkhun, Sungmin, Donghae, Victoria and back to Hankyung.
At that time, the workers started to serve their lunch and they all looked at the delicious food on the table. They were so happy looking at the food especially Hyukjae because he loves to eat although his body like an anchovy. He can finish 7 plates by himself.
“Hyukjae….” Victoria smiled at him. But, Hyukjae know what Victoria wants to tell him is to control himself. So, Hyukjae did as his auntie told. All the food are being served on the tables and all of them looks delicious and elegant with the decoration on it.
“Let’s eat..” They started to eat their lunch happily and while having their lunch. Siwon do not miss his view of Donghae who is directly infront of him. He smiled when he looked at her while eating. She looked cute and very very cute while eating. Hyukjae noticed it and he blame it on Chansung. He took Chansung food.
Donghae, who having a steak and she tried to cut the meat but failed. Siwon noticed it and cutted the meat for her. She smiled shyly and thanked him. She ate the meat easily and her face become red. Hyukjae again noticed it and again he took Chansung food. Chansung become annoying at Hyukjae but didn’t blame him. He know that Hyukjae got jealous with Siwon.
Victoria, she noticed Hyukjae jealousy towards Siwon just shook her head and smiled. She knowed that Hyukjae was in love with DOnghae but she wanted to test him weither Hyukjae love her with sincerity or just like her. Along the lunch session, finally Victoria know the result and she giggled happily.
“Victoria, why you suddenly giggled?” Victoria smiled at Heechul. “Victoria don’t be to excited about this two birds…” Hankyung said about Siwon and Donghae. “It’s not because about this two only. Because there is another one and a love story started to begin after this.” Victoria winked at Hyukjae but no one noticed it. They continued their lunch happily.
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At the villa…
“Takes Hankyung, Heechul unnie and Siwon bags and show their room.” Victoria ordered the maids and did as she told them. Hankyung, Heechul and Victoria went outside to discuss something that they didn’t anyone to hear. Nichkhun and Chansung went to their room. Only left Hyukjae, Donghae, Kyuhyun and Sungmin in the living room.
“Hehe…” Donghae giggled. “Are you crazy?” Donghae ignored Hyukjae words and continued giggling. “I think she in love with Siwon” Kyuhyun said. “NO WAY!!!” Hyukjae didn’t realize what he had said and make his way to his share room with Kyuhyun. “Someone got jealous.” Sungmin teased.
Suddenly, Siwon walked towards them. “Can I take Donghae..” Siwon asked and they just nodded. “Thank you. Donghae let’s go.” Siwon took Donghae hand and walk outside from the villa to his car. Donghae happily went inside the car. “Where he gonna bring our Hae??” Sungmin worried.
“Where??” Nichkhun and Chansung appeared nowhere. “We don’t know.” Kyuhyun said. “Let’s follow them. I feel like something bad will happen to our Hae.” Sungmin said. Nichkhun and Kyuhyun agree with her. “Sorry, I can’t go. I need to talk something with that Anchovy.” Chansung said and they just nodded.
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“What you guys doing with my car?” Victoria asked them when about Kyuhyun wanted to open the driver door. “We need to do something important. Can we??” Sungmin and Nichkhun make their puppy eyes. “Okay. But, tell me first. What you gonna do with my car?” Victoria waited for the answer. They had no choice and just tell the truth.
“Is true? Let’s go together.” Victoria take the driver seat and Nichkhun besides her. Sungmin and Kyuhyun sit on the back seat. Victoria started the engine and drive out from the villa. “Where they are now?” Victoria asked looking for Siwon car.
“There is the car. Let’s follow it.” Nichkhun said. “Where?” Victoria asked. “TURN TO THE LEFT, AUNTIE!” SUngmin and Kyuhyun shouted. “No need to shout. It’s will break my eardrums.” One of Victoria hand puted on her ear. “Sorry. Because we become so nervous now.”
Suddenly, the car that Siwon and Donghae had been stopped in front of amusement park. “Let’s follow them.” Victoria said madly. “Auntie, why you so mad?” Nichkhun whispering to her afraid that Siwon and Donghae will heard. “Because I mad. I don’t want them to get married.” Victoria said. “Auntie, they already entered the amusement park.” Kyuhyun said.
“Let’s follow them. We divided into to group, me and Nichkhun. Kyuhyun and SUngmin.” Victoria went to pay the fee entrance. “Let’s go.” When they about to find Donghae, Victoria stopped them. “Remember to keep your distance and don’t let they see you. Got it?” They nodded to Victoria advise. “Let’s go.” Victoria pulled Nichkhun with her while Kyuhyun pulled SUngmin with him.
Siwon was buying Donghae an ice-cream and she took it happily. “She look so happy.” Nichkhun said. Suddenly, Victoria hand touched Nichkhun hard place when about she want to pulled Nichkhun with her. “What this?” She look at Nichkhun with her confused expression. Nichkhun look at her innoncently. “What is it, Auntie?” Nichkhun asked.
Again Victoria touched her hard spot. “Auntie, what are you doing?” Nichkhun pushed Victoria hand. “Are you a girl, Khunnie?” Nichkhun just silent and Victoria waited for the answer. “Forget about it. AHH!!! They gone.” Victoria lost their target. “Let’s find them.” Victoria pulled Nichkhun with her. Nichkhun seems like she scared if Victoria found out about her.
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At the villa..
Hyukjae and Chansung were at the pool outside the villa. They swam together and playing prank on each others happily. Suddenly, Hyukjae stopped and sat at the pool sides. His legs playing with the water. Chansung then sat besides him.
“Hyukjae, just tell her.” Hyukjae confused with Chansung. “Don’t be stupid Hyukjae. Just tell her that you love her.” Hyukjae just looked at the pool. “I can’t.” “Why?” Chansung asked for the answer. “Only Siwon can make Donghae happy.”
“But, you had good looking if we compared you with Siwon….Oppss, sorry.” Chansung knowed that Hyukjae can’t be compared with Siwon that so perfect for any girl in this world. Silent fill them two. “Hyukjae, love we have to compare it with sincerity not wealth or whatever that made you worst from him.” Chansung cheered his bestfriends. “Cheer Up my friend. Don’t be like this. Just tell her I Love You, DOnghae and we can find out.”
“Maybe she love you too.” Chansung said. “I didn’t think she love me back.” Hyukjae said. “How do you know that? You even didn’t tell her yet you know the answer. HYUKJAE!!!! LOOK AT ME, BABO!!!!” Chansung smacked Hyukjae back. “WHAT DID YOU SAID?? I’M NOT babo but I am-” “BABO!!” Chansung helped him finished his words.
“AHHH!!!!” Hyukjae suddenly yelled at Chansung. “What?” Chansung look at him. “I tell her. I can’t keep it anymore… Can you help me?? If she didn’t love me back, help me rip my body and throw it to the beach…Promise me…” Hyukjae look at CHansung. “Okay. I hope she not love you back because I can rip you.” Hyukjae gave him a deadth glared. “You need to tell her first before Siwon did.” Chansung said.
“What if Siwon had told her first?” Hyukjae asked. “You had no choice. You must be rip by me. I promise you I will rip you.” Chansung said and left Hyukjae alone outside at the pool. “BABO, CHANSUNG!!! He only promise that he want to rip me not helping me to tell Donghae. BABO!!!” Hyukjae suddenly become silent and looked the sky.
Hyukjae bitter past now playing on his mind. “I have to thank to Auntie Victoria because she adopted me.” Hyukjae walked inside the villa.
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At the amusement park..
“Auntie, have you found them?” Kyuhyun asked. “No..” Victoria shooked her head. “Found whose??” A familiar voice walked towards them. “Ahh, Siwon-shii and Hae.. What are you doing here?” Victoria gave them a fake smile same as Sungmin, Kyuhyun and NIchkhun. “Did you follow us?” Donghae asked.
“Aishhh, why should we followed you two? Khunnie, wanted to go here.” Victoria lied them. But, Siwon knowed the truth they were here. Siwon smirked at them and that make Victoria annoying with him. “Donghae, I think we should back home. It’s already night.” Siwon said to Donghae and she just nodded. “Let’s we back home together.” Victoria said to them and they agreed with her. They walked to their cars.
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At the villa…
“Awww, my baby.” Heechul huged her daughter. Hankyung, Hyukjae and Chansung walked towards Heechul and Donghae. They all now outside of the villa in front of the main door. “Can I say something?” Siwon asked. “Of course.” Hankyung said. “What he had plan?” Sungmin whispering to Victoria and she just shooked her head.
“Donghae.” Everyone eyes on them. Siwon pulled Donghae and kiss her on lips. Donghae eyes become wide while the other jaw dropped. Siwon pulled away and kneeling in front of Donghae and took out a small box and had a ring in it. “Han Donghae, will you marry me?” Donghae looked confusedly. “Don’t accept it?” Victoria said in small tone.
“Donghae, don’t make him waited so long.” Hankyung said. Donghae didn’t know what to do because her heart don’t let her accept it. “Han DOnghae, will you marry me?” Siwon proposed her again. “I…I…” Donghae now getting confused.
“Auntie, do something?” Sungmin said to Victoria. Victoria now thinked something to make Donghae didn’t accept the proposal and suddenly, she remember about Nichkhun. “Wait a minute. Khunnie, are you a girl or a boy?” Victoria question shoked all of them and now they all eyes on Nichkhun and stopped at Chansung.
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END OF CHAPTER EIGHT……TO BE CONTINUE……Perfect Girl Evolution
How this chapter??? Is it enjoy ur guys??? I hope it did....
Many of unanswer question in this chapter...
Will Donghae accept the proposal??? What about Khunnie, a boy or girl???? and Hyukjae bitter past.. "WHat had happen to him??? and "Why he need to thank Victoria for adopted him?????
Please waited patiently for the next chapter, if u want to know the answer... Maybe, I will post it on the next week...
お楽しみにしてください (O tanoshimi ni shite kudasai)
기대하십시오 (gidaehasibsio)
Author : tHeRED BunnY+penguin
Type : Multi-chapters
Status : On-going
Chapter : 8
Genre : Comedy, Angst, Drama, Romance
Rated : PG-13
Warnings : Un-beta… Gender Switch!! A lot of Grammar Mistake!!
Theme Song : SUPER JUNIOR - Shining Star
Disclaimer : I don’t own them, just this fic! This fic is inspired by Japanese manga Perfect Girl Evolution/ヤマトナデシコ七変化 ‘Yamato Nadeshiko Shichi Henge’.
Summary : Hyukjae, Kyuhyun, Chansung and Nichkhun are beautiful, handsome, young men living in a huge mansion. One day, their landlord, whom they call “Auntie Victoria”, asks them a favor to make her niece, Donghae, who’s going to be living with them, into a respectable young lady. She agrees to make their living expenses free of charge if they succeed, but if they fail, she’ll triple their rent. Due to their confidence in knowing how to deal with women, they agree, but once they meet Donghae, they begin to realize that their lovely living arrangements may soon be in jeopardy. But, along the task, Hyukjae had fallen in love with Donghae…
CHAPTER EIGHT
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Still at the restaurant..
“My future husband..” Donghae confused why so sudden. "Nice to meet you, Princess.” Siwon kissed Donghae back hand and smiled to her. Donghae melted with Siwon smile and she smiled too. Her face become red and she hide her face in her mother shoulder.
“Hyukjae, she have been took by someone else. Poor you, Hyukjae.” Chansung said and Hyukjae immediately sat on the chair and waited for the lunch. Ingnoring the situation occur now. “Hyukjae, control yourself.” Nichkhun whispered to him. Hyukjae just keep silent.
“Let’s sit..” Victoria said and all of them sat on their seat. The tables is round tables. Start with Hankyung, besides him is Heechul, Siwon, Hyukjae, Chansung, Kyuhyun, Nichkhun, Sungmin, Donghae, Victoria and back to Hankyung.
At that time, the workers started to serve their lunch and they all looked at the delicious food on the table. They were so happy looking at the food especially Hyukjae because he loves to eat although his body like an anchovy. He can finish 7 plates by himself.
“Hyukjae….” Victoria smiled at him. But, Hyukjae know what Victoria wants to tell him is to control himself. So, Hyukjae did as his auntie told. All the food are being served on the tables and all of them looks delicious and elegant with the decoration on it.
“Let’s eat..” They started to eat their lunch happily and while having their lunch. Siwon do not miss his view of Donghae who is directly infront of him. He smiled when he looked at her while eating. She looked cute and very very cute while eating. Hyukjae noticed it and he blame it on Chansung. He took Chansung food.
Donghae, who having a steak and she tried to cut the meat but failed. Siwon noticed it and cutted the meat for her. She smiled shyly and thanked him. She ate the meat easily and her face become red. Hyukjae again noticed it and again he took Chansung food. Chansung become annoying at Hyukjae but didn’t blame him. He know that Hyukjae got jealous with Siwon.
Victoria, she noticed Hyukjae jealousy towards Siwon just shook her head and smiled. She knowed that Hyukjae was in love with DOnghae but she wanted to test him weither Hyukjae love her with sincerity or just like her. Along the lunch session, finally Victoria know the result and she giggled happily.
“Victoria, why you suddenly giggled?” Victoria smiled at Heechul. “Victoria don’t be to excited about this two birds…” Hankyung said about Siwon and Donghae. “It’s not because about this two only. Because there is another one and a love story started to begin after this.” Victoria winked at Hyukjae but no one noticed it. They continued their lunch happily.
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At the villa…
“Takes Hankyung, Heechul unnie and Siwon bags and show their room.” Victoria ordered the maids and did as she told them. Hankyung, Heechul and Victoria went outside to discuss something that they didn’t anyone to hear. Nichkhun and Chansung went to their room. Only left Hyukjae, Donghae, Kyuhyun and Sungmin in the living room.
“Hehe…” Donghae giggled. “Are you crazy?” Donghae ignored Hyukjae words and continued giggling. “I think she in love with Siwon” Kyuhyun said. “NO WAY!!!” Hyukjae didn’t realize what he had said and make his way to his share room with Kyuhyun. “Someone got jealous.” Sungmin teased.
Suddenly, Siwon walked towards them. “Can I take Donghae..” Siwon asked and they just nodded. “Thank you. Donghae let’s go.” Siwon took Donghae hand and walk outside from the villa to his car. Donghae happily went inside the car. “Where he gonna bring our Hae??” Sungmin worried.
“Where??” Nichkhun and Chansung appeared nowhere. “We don’t know.” Kyuhyun said. “Let’s follow them. I feel like something bad will happen to our Hae.” Sungmin said. Nichkhun and Kyuhyun agree with her. “Sorry, I can’t go. I need to talk something with that Anchovy.” Chansung said and they just nodded.
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“What you guys doing with my car?” Victoria asked them when about Kyuhyun wanted to open the driver door. “We need to do something important. Can we??” Sungmin and Nichkhun make their puppy eyes. “Okay. But, tell me first. What you gonna do with my car?” Victoria waited for the answer. They had no choice and just tell the truth.
“Is true? Let’s go together.” Victoria take the driver seat and Nichkhun besides her. Sungmin and Kyuhyun sit on the back seat. Victoria started the engine and drive out from the villa. “Where they are now?” Victoria asked looking for Siwon car.
“There is the car. Let’s follow it.” Nichkhun said. “Where?” Victoria asked. “TURN TO THE LEFT, AUNTIE!” SUngmin and Kyuhyun shouted. “No need to shout. It’s will break my eardrums.” One of Victoria hand puted on her ear. “Sorry. Because we become so nervous now.”
Suddenly, the car that Siwon and Donghae had been stopped in front of amusement park. “Let’s follow them.” Victoria said madly. “Auntie, why you so mad?” Nichkhun whispering to her afraid that Siwon and Donghae will heard. “Because I mad. I don’t want them to get married.” Victoria said. “Auntie, they already entered the amusement park.” Kyuhyun said.
“Let’s follow them. We divided into to group, me and Nichkhun. Kyuhyun and SUngmin.” Victoria went to pay the fee entrance. “Let’s go.” When they about to find Donghae, Victoria stopped them. “Remember to keep your distance and don’t let they see you. Got it?” They nodded to Victoria advise. “Let’s go.” Victoria pulled Nichkhun with her while Kyuhyun pulled SUngmin with him.
Siwon was buying Donghae an ice-cream and she took it happily. “She look so happy.” Nichkhun said. Suddenly, Victoria hand touched Nichkhun hard place when about she want to pulled Nichkhun with her. “What this?” She look at Nichkhun with her confused expression. Nichkhun look at her innoncently. “What is it, Auntie?” Nichkhun asked.
Again Victoria touched her hard spot. “Auntie, what are you doing?” Nichkhun pushed Victoria hand. “Are you a girl, Khunnie?” Nichkhun just silent and Victoria waited for the answer. “Forget about it. AHH!!! They gone.” Victoria lost their target. “Let’s find them.” Victoria pulled Nichkhun with her. Nichkhun seems like she scared if Victoria found out about her.
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At the villa..
Hyukjae and Chansung were at the pool outside the villa. They swam together and playing prank on each others happily. Suddenly, Hyukjae stopped and sat at the pool sides. His legs playing with the water. Chansung then sat besides him.
“Hyukjae, just tell her.” Hyukjae confused with Chansung. “Don’t be stupid Hyukjae. Just tell her that you love her.” Hyukjae just looked at the pool. “I can’t.” “Why?” Chansung asked for the answer. “Only Siwon can make Donghae happy.”
“But, you had good looking if we compared you with Siwon….Oppss, sorry.” Chansung knowed that Hyukjae can’t be compared with Siwon that so perfect for any girl in this world. Silent fill them two. “Hyukjae, love we have to compare it with sincerity not wealth or whatever that made you worst from him.” Chansung cheered his bestfriends. “Cheer Up my friend. Don’t be like this. Just tell her I Love You, DOnghae and we can find out.”
“Maybe she love you too.” Chansung said. “I didn’t think she love me back.” Hyukjae said. “How do you know that? You even didn’t tell her yet you know the answer. HYUKJAE!!!! LOOK AT ME, BABO!!!!” Chansung smacked Hyukjae back. “WHAT DID YOU SAID?? I’M NOT babo but I am-” “BABO!!” Chansung helped him finished his words.
“AHHH!!!!” Hyukjae suddenly yelled at Chansung. “What?” Chansung look at him. “I tell her. I can’t keep it anymore… Can you help me?? If she didn’t love me back, help me rip my body and throw it to the beach…Promise me…” Hyukjae look at CHansung. “Okay. I hope she not love you back because I can rip you.” Hyukjae gave him a deadth glared. “You need to tell her first before Siwon did.” Chansung said.
“What if Siwon had told her first?” Hyukjae asked. “You had no choice. You must be rip by me. I promise you I will rip you.” Chansung said and left Hyukjae alone outside at the pool. “BABO, CHANSUNG!!! He only promise that he want to rip me not helping me to tell Donghae. BABO!!!” Hyukjae suddenly become silent and looked the sky.
Hyukjae bitter past now playing on his mind. “I have to thank to Auntie Victoria because she adopted me.” Hyukjae walked inside the villa.
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At the amusement park..
“Auntie, have you found them?” Kyuhyun asked. “No..” Victoria shooked her head. “Found whose??” A familiar voice walked towards them. “Ahh, Siwon-shii and Hae.. What are you doing here?” Victoria gave them a fake smile same as Sungmin, Kyuhyun and NIchkhun. “Did you follow us?” Donghae asked.
“Aishhh, why should we followed you two? Khunnie, wanted to go here.” Victoria lied them. But, Siwon knowed the truth they were here. Siwon smirked at them and that make Victoria annoying with him. “Donghae, I think we should back home. It’s already night.” Siwon said to Donghae and she just nodded. “Let’s we back home together.” Victoria said to them and they agreed with her. They walked to their cars.
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At the villa…
“Awww, my baby.” Heechul huged her daughter. Hankyung, Hyukjae and Chansung walked towards Heechul and Donghae. They all now outside of the villa in front of the main door. “Can I say something?” Siwon asked. “Of course.” Hankyung said. “What he had plan?” Sungmin whispering to Victoria and she just shooked her head.
“Donghae.” Everyone eyes on them. Siwon pulled Donghae and kiss her on lips. Donghae eyes become wide while the other jaw dropped. Siwon pulled away and kneeling in front of Donghae and took out a small box and had a ring in it. “Han Donghae, will you marry me?” Donghae looked confusedly. “Don’t accept it?” Victoria said in small tone.
“Donghae, don’t make him waited so long.” Hankyung said. Donghae didn’t know what to do because her heart don’t let her accept it. “Han DOnghae, will you marry me?” Siwon proposed her again. “I…I…” Donghae now getting confused.
“Auntie, do something?” Sungmin said to Victoria. Victoria now thinked something to make Donghae didn’t accept the proposal and suddenly, she remember about Nichkhun. “Wait a minute. Khunnie, are you a girl or a boy?” Victoria question shoked all of them and now they all eyes on Nichkhun and stopped at Chansung.
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END OF CHAPTER EIGHT……TO BE CONTINUE……Perfect Girl Evolution
How this chapter??? Is it enjoy ur guys??? I hope it did....
Many of unanswer question in this chapter...
Will Donghae accept the proposal??? What about Khunnie, a boy or girl???? and Hyukjae bitter past.. "WHat had happen to him??? and "Why he need to thank Victoria for adopted him?????
Please waited patiently for the next chapter, if u want to know the answer... Maybe, I will post it on the next week...
お楽しみにしてください (O tanoshimi ni shite kudasai)
기대하십시오 (gidaehasibsio)