Perfect Girl Evolution *CHAPTER FIVE : Halloween Special - Part A*
Title : Perfect Girl Evolution
Author : tHeRED BunnY+penguin
Type : Multi-chapters
Status : On-going
Chapter : 5 : Halloween Special - Part A
Genre : Comedy, Angst, Drama, Romance, Horror, Suspense
Rated : PG-13
Warnings : Gender Switch!! A lot of Grammar Mistake!!
Theme Song : SUPER JUNIOR - Shining Star
Disclaimer : I don’t own them, just this fic! This fic is inspired by Japanese manga Perfect Girl Evolution/ヤマトナデシコ七変化 ‘Yamato Nadeshiko Shichi Henge’.
Summary : Hyukjae, Kyuhyun, Chansung and Nichkhun are beautiful, handsome, young men living in a huge mansion. One day, their landlord, whom they call “Auntie Victoria”, asks them a favor to make her niece, Donghae, who’s going to be living with them, into a respectable young lady. She agrees to make their living expenses free of charge if they succeed, but if they fail, she’ll triple their rent. Due to their confidence in knowing how to deal with women, they agree, but once they meet Donghae, they begin to realize that their lovely living arrangements may soon be in jeopardy. But, along the task, Hyukjae had fallen in love with Donghae…
CHAPTER FIVE : Halloween Special - Part A
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A week later..
Donghae still like when she first time came here. Nothing change. Now she is more be careful of Hyukjae that will kiss her nowhere if she doesn’t wanted to wear a clothes that girls should wear. Hyukjae, Kyuhyun, Nichkhun and Chansung sighing.
“I’m hungry!!!” Hyukjae rolled over around the living room. “Yah, Hyukjae don’t be like a kid.” Kyuhyun kicked him while he rolled his body. Hyukjae pouted liked a kid. “Hyukjae, you look like an old man.” Chansung teased him. Hyukjae throws a pillow towards Chansung. Chansung got mad and throws a pillow back to him. They now playing pillow fight.
“AAAHH, OOUUCHHH!!!! Can you two be like you have to be?” Nichkhun yelled at them because of their fight he got a trace too. Kyuhyun just shook his head to his childish friends. He continued reading the newspaper. Chansung and Hyukjae now being punish by Nichkhun.
“Nichkhun can you stop????” Chansung and Hyukjae yelled at him. Nichkhun started to cry. “Khunnie, don’t cry we just joking right, Hyukjae.” Chansung tried to coax his brother. “No, I not joking with him. I truly mad at him.” Hyukjae gave Nichkhun a death glare. “UWAHHH!!!!!!!!! HAE!!!!!!!!” Nichkhun runned upstairs to Donghae room.
“It’s all your fault.” Chansung blame Hyukjae. “Not me. It’s Kyuhyun.” Hyukjae blame Kyuhyun and got a smack on his head by him. “Just admit you did it! Don’t blame on others.” Kyuhyun said to him. Chansung laughing like a crazy man while holding his stomach. “You so funny, Hyukjae. AHAHAH!!!” Chansung laughed hardly at him. “SHUT UP!!!”
“AAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” Nichkhun voice can be heard by Hyukjae, Kyuhyun and Chansung downstairs. “NICHKHUN!!” Chansung said. “DONGHAE!!” Hyukjae said. “MINNIE!!” A pair smack on his head. “NO MINNIE HERE!!” They make their way to Donghae room upstairs.
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“DONGHAE!!” “NICHKHUN!!” They open Donghae door room and reveal nothing only Nichkhun while crying so hard. “Chansung!!!” Nichkhun huged Chansung tightly. “What happen?” Kyuhyun asked him. But, he answered by pointed to one of Donghae skeleton. “What about him? He not handsome like I am.” Another smacked from Kyuhyun, Hyukjae got.
“But, Khunnie? He not doing anything.” Chansung said to him. “JUST NOW, HE MOVED!!! BABO!!!” Nichkhun yelled at them. “AHAHA!! Nichkhun, how can those skeleton moved while he had no-” “AAAHHHHH!!!!!!” They all four screaming on top of their lungs because the skeleton moved his hand. A few seconds after that, they heard someone crying behind the skeleton.
“Chansung, can you hear that?” Nichkhun asked Chansung and he nodded as the answer. “Someone is crying, right Hyukjae.” Hyukjae nodded to Kyuhyun words. “Whose there? You better appear or I kick liked I kicked Chansung two years ago!”
“Hyukjae, that was old story.” Chansung said to him. The crying voice become louder and more frightening. “I’m scared!!!” Nichkhun now crying along the crying voice. Hyukjae took a pillow on Donghae bed and throw it towards the skeleton. The skeleton fall on the floor and the crying voice stopped from cry.
Hyukjae, Kyuhyun, Nichkhun and Chansung gulped of what coming next. About a minute, they stood like that. Suddenly, a white things and very long hair cover her face came out from the darkness and smacked Hyukjae hardly. “AAHHHH!! HYUKJAE!!! AAAHHHH!!!!” Nichkhun, Kyuhyun and Chansung just screaming over the creature.
Hyukjae managed to grip the creature’s wrists and pinned it down on the cold floor. “Kyu, I got it. Switch on the light.” Hyukjae ordered Kyuhyun and he did liked what Hyukjae said. “DONGHAE!!!” They shocked at the creature because it was Donghae. “Donghae, I got you again.” Hyukjae leaned down to kiss her but he got a very very hard kick on his member.
“OOUCCHH!!!” Hyukjae rolled over the room while holded his pain. “AHAHAHA!!!” Chansung again laughed at him. Donghae bring her knees up to her chest and started crying liked she does before. “Donghae, why’re you crying?” Chansung asked her. “It’s something happen?” Now Nichkhun asked her. “It’s Hyukjae did something to you? Like touched you? Kissed you? Or he RAPED YOU????” Kyuhyun is too over the limit.
“Ky-Kyu, I never di-did th-that.” Hyukjae still can talk but because of the pain he got, he can talk propally. “Hae, please talk to us.”Nichkhun huged her. “We can help you, if we can.” Chansung tried to comfort her. Kyuhyun just gave Hyukjae a death glared. “I’m not raped her.” Hyukjae said to him.
“It’s already past.” Donghae finally speak out. “It’s already past?” They looked at each other. “October.” “October?” “Had past.” “Of course. Now is November 3rd.” “That day had past.” “What day??” Donghae making them confused. “Had past and I’m forgot my important day.” “You forgotted your important day. What day?” “I had forgot it.” “AHH!! DONGHAE!!” Donghae fainted because of dizziness took her body. She crying non-stop from the morning until now.
*FLASHBACK*
“Lalala.” Donghae happily entered the mansion after she watering all the flowers outside. Hyukjae, Kyuhyun, Nichkhun and Chansung not wake up yet. So, she decided to make their breakfast early after that she can fill her free time with her precious things. Along the ways to the kitchen, she suddenly noticed a calendar on the wall.
She decided to look at the calendar. “Today, is November 3rd. Time passed so quickly.” Something bothering DOnghae mind. She had forgot something important event to her. But, she can ‘t remembering it. So, she take a look on the calendar. About a minute she looked at the calendar, finally she remembered her forgotten important day.
“AAHHHH!!! I FORGOT IT!!!! UUWAAHHHHH!!!” She runned to her room upstairs and locked herself while crying so hard.
*END OF FLASHBACK*
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In the living room…
Hyukjae, Kyuhyun, Nichkhun and Chansung now sitting on the sofa while trying to remember what event had in October. “October?” “October?” “October?” “October?” They can oly said October. “Ah, Kyu! Why don’t you call Sungmin to come here and bring us some food. If still doesn’t eat since this morning until now.” Hyukjae said to Kyuhyun who now calling for Sungmin.
“She will be here in 5 minutes.” Kyuhyun mentioned them. “WHAT??” Kyuhyun nodded at them three and make his ways to the main door. “Is he okay?” Chansung asked. “Is she okay too?” Hyukjae asked. They got a smacked on their head. “Why you two so stupid? I think she on the way here, so it’s will be 5 minute when Kyuhyun called her just now. BABO!!!” Nichkhun go to Kyuhyun and waited for Sungmin to arrive. Chansung and Hyukjae pouted.
After 5 minute, Sungmin arrived at their mansion.
“Minnie, here! Who are hungry?” Sungmin happily gave them two bucket of dinner. Yes, they didn’t it eating since morning until night. “MINNIE, THANK YOU!! NOW WE LOOK LIKE A ZOMBIE ALIVE AGAIN!!!” They happily eating the meal.
“Where is Hae?” Sungmin asked them about her bestfriend. “Minnie, you must help us find what event have in October.” Hyukjae said to her with full mouth. “Yes, Minnie. She locked herself in her room whole day.” Chasung said. “Not eating, bathing, cooking and whatever her work she usually does everyday.” Nichkhun said. “But, October already past.” Sungmin confused. “Minnie, she crying whole day too.” Kyuhyun said to her. “How poor she is?”
“Minnie, you must help us.” Hyukjae said to her. “She forgot a very important day of her in last October.” Chansung said. “MINNIE, YOU MUST HELP US!!!!” They appeal to Sungmin. “Okay, okay. But, finish your dinner first. After that, we together thinking what event have in last October.” Sungmin said to them that look like abandoned children.
“HAE, DON’T WORRY MINNIE IS HERE TO HELP YOU!!!!!!!!!”
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END OF CHAPTER FIVE……PART A……TO BE CONTINUE……Perfect Girl Evolution
I'm sorry for the late updated and my promise to you. I said, I will update this chapter 5 on 31 october but my laptop got virus and I need to repair it. My laptop had come back now, so here the chapter 5 and it's pretty long. So, I divided it into to part. This chapter had two part, part A and part B. I will post the part B tomorrow. So, I'm sorry again and enjoy!!!
Comment are pleasent..
Author : tHeRED BunnY+penguin
Type : Multi-chapters
Status : On-going
Chapter : 5 : Halloween Special - Part A
Genre : Comedy, Angst, Drama, Romance, Horror, Suspense
Rated : PG-13
Warnings : Gender Switch!! A lot of Grammar Mistake!!
Theme Song : SUPER JUNIOR - Shining Star
Disclaimer : I don’t own them, just this fic! This fic is inspired by Japanese manga Perfect Girl Evolution/ヤマトナデシコ七変化 ‘Yamato Nadeshiko Shichi Henge’.
Summary : Hyukjae, Kyuhyun, Chansung and Nichkhun are beautiful, handsome, young men living in a huge mansion. One day, their landlord, whom they call “Auntie Victoria”, asks them a favor to make her niece, Donghae, who’s going to be living with them, into a respectable young lady. She agrees to make their living expenses free of charge if they succeed, but if they fail, she’ll triple their rent. Due to their confidence in knowing how to deal with women, they agree, but once they meet Donghae, they begin to realize that their lovely living arrangements may soon be in jeopardy. But, along the task, Hyukjae had fallen in love with Donghae…
CHAPTER FIVE : Halloween Special - Part A
………………………………………………………………
A week later..
Donghae still like when she first time came here. Nothing change. Now she is more be careful of Hyukjae that will kiss her nowhere if she doesn’t wanted to wear a clothes that girls should wear. Hyukjae, Kyuhyun, Nichkhun and Chansung sighing.
“I’m hungry!!!” Hyukjae rolled over around the living room. “Yah, Hyukjae don’t be like a kid.” Kyuhyun kicked him while he rolled his body. Hyukjae pouted liked a kid. “Hyukjae, you look like an old man.” Chansung teased him. Hyukjae throws a pillow towards Chansung. Chansung got mad and throws a pillow back to him. They now playing pillow fight.
“AAAHH, OOUUCHHH!!!! Can you two be like you have to be?” Nichkhun yelled at them because of their fight he got a trace too. Kyuhyun just shook his head to his childish friends. He continued reading the newspaper. Chansung and Hyukjae now being punish by Nichkhun.
“Nichkhun can you stop????” Chansung and Hyukjae yelled at him. Nichkhun started to cry. “Khunnie, don’t cry we just joking right, Hyukjae.” Chansung tried to coax his brother. “No, I not joking with him. I truly mad at him.” Hyukjae gave Nichkhun a death glare. “UWAHHH!!!!!!!!! HAE!!!!!!!!” Nichkhun runned upstairs to Donghae room.
“It’s all your fault.” Chansung blame Hyukjae. “Not me. It’s Kyuhyun.” Hyukjae blame Kyuhyun and got a smack on his head by him. “Just admit you did it! Don’t blame on others.” Kyuhyun said to him. Chansung laughing like a crazy man while holding his stomach. “You so funny, Hyukjae. AHAHAH!!!” Chansung laughed hardly at him. “SHUT UP!!!”
“AAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” Nichkhun voice can be heard by Hyukjae, Kyuhyun and Chansung downstairs. “NICHKHUN!!” Chansung said. “DONGHAE!!” Hyukjae said. “MINNIE!!” A pair smack on his head. “NO MINNIE HERE!!” They make their way to Donghae room upstairs.
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“DONGHAE!!” “NICHKHUN!!” They open Donghae door room and reveal nothing only Nichkhun while crying so hard. “Chansung!!!” Nichkhun huged Chansung tightly. “What happen?” Kyuhyun asked him. But, he answered by pointed to one of Donghae skeleton. “What about him? He not handsome like I am.” Another smacked from Kyuhyun, Hyukjae got.
“But, Khunnie? He not doing anything.” Chansung said to him. “JUST NOW, HE MOVED!!! BABO!!!” Nichkhun yelled at them. “AHAHA!! Nichkhun, how can those skeleton moved while he had no-” “AAAHHHHH!!!!!!” They all four screaming on top of their lungs because the skeleton moved his hand. A few seconds after that, they heard someone crying behind the skeleton.
“Chansung, can you hear that?” Nichkhun asked Chansung and he nodded as the answer. “Someone is crying, right Hyukjae.” Hyukjae nodded to Kyuhyun words. “Whose there? You better appear or I kick liked I kicked Chansung two years ago!”
“Hyukjae, that was old story.” Chansung said to him. The crying voice become louder and more frightening. “I’m scared!!!” Nichkhun now crying along the crying voice. Hyukjae took a pillow on Donghae bed and throw it towards the skeleton. The skeleton fall on the floor and the crying voice stopped from cry.
Hyukjae, Kyuhyun, Nichkhun and Chansung gulped of what coming next. About a minute, they stood like that. Suddenly, a white things and very long hair cover her face came out from the darkness and smacked Hyukjae hardly. “AAHHHH!! HYUKJAE!!! AAAHHHH!!!!” Nichkhun, Kyuhyun and Chansung just screaming over the creature.
Hyukjae managed to grip the creature’s wrists and pinned it down on the cold floor. “Kyu, I got it. Switch on the light.” Hyukjae ordered Kyuhyun and he did liked what Hyukjae said. “DONGHAE!!!” They shocked at the creature because it was Donghae. “Donghae, I got you again.” Hyukjae leaned down to kiss her but he got a very very hard kick on his member.
“OOUCCHH!!!” Hyukjae rolled over the room while holded his pain. “AHAHAHA!!!” Chansung again laughed at him. Donghae bring her knees up to her chest and started crying liked she does before. “Donghae, why’re you crying?” Chansung asked her. “It’s something happen?” Now Nichkhun asked her. “It’s Hyukjae did something to you? Like touched you? Kissed you? Or he RAPED YOU????” Kyuhyun is too over the limit.
“Ky-Kyu, I never di-did th-that.” Hyukjae still can talk but because of the pain he got, he can talk propally. “Hae, please talk to us.”Nichkhun huged her. “We can help you, if we can.” Chansung tried to comfort her. Kyuhyun just gave Hyukjae a death glared. “I’m not raped her.” Hyukjae said to him.
“It’s already past.” Donghae finally speak out. “It’s already past?” They looked at each other. “October.” “October?” “Had past.” “Of course. Now is November 3rd.” “That day had past.” “What day??” Donghae making them confused. “Had past and I’m forgot my important day.” “You forgotted your important day. What day?” “I had forgot it.” “AHH!! DONGHAE!!” Donghae fainted because of dizziness took her body. She crying non-stop from the morning until now.
*FLASHBACK*
“Lalala.” Donghae happily entered the mansion after she watering all the flowers outside. Hyukjae, Kyuhyun, Nichkhun and Chansung not wake up yet. So, she decided to make their breakfast early after that she can fill her free time with her precious things. Along the ways to the kitchen, she suddenly noticed a calendar on the wall.
She decided to look at the calendar. “Today, is November 3rd. Time passed so quickly.” Something bothering DOnghae mind. She had forgot something important event to her. But, she can ‘t remembering it. So, she take a look on the calendar. About a minute she looked at the calendar, finally she remembered her forgotten important day.
“AAHHHH!!! I FORGOT IT!!!! UUWAAHHHHH!!!” She runned to her room upstairs and locked herself while crying so hard.
*END OF FLASHBACK*
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In the living room…
Hyukjae, Kyuhyun, Nichkhun and Chansung now sitting on the sofa while trying to remember what event had in October. “October?” “October?” “October?” “October?” They can oly said October. “Ah, Kyu! Why don’t you call Sungmin to come here and bring us some food. If still doesn’t eat since this morning until now.” Hyukjae said to Kyuhyun who now calling for Sungmin.
“She will be here in 5 minutes.” Kyuhyun mentioned them. “WHAT??” Kyuhyun nodded at them three and make his ways to the main door. “Is he okay?” Chansung asked. “Is she okay too?” Hyukjae asked. They got a smacked on their head. “Why you two so stupid? I think she on the way here, so it’s will be 5 minute when Kyuhyun called her just now. BABO!!!” Nichkhun go to Kyuhyun and waited for Sungmin to arrive. Chansung and Hyukjae pouted.
After 5 minute, Sungmin arrived at their mansion.
“Minnie, here! Who are hungry?” Sungmin happily gave them two bucket of dinner. Yes, they didn’t it eating since morning until night. “MINNIE, THANK YOU!! NOW WE LOOK LIKE A ZOMBIE ALIVE AGAIN!!!” They happily eating the meal.
“Where is Hae?” Sungmin asked them about her bestfriend. “Minnie, you must help us find what event have in October.” Hyukjae said to her with full mouth. “Yes, Minnie. She locked herself in her room whole day.” Chasung said. “Not eating, bathing, cooking and whatever her work she usually does everyday.” Nichkhun said. “But, October already past.” Sungmin confused. “Minnie, she crying whole day too.” Kyuhyun said to her. “How poor she is?”
“Minnie, you must help us.” Hyukjae said to her. “She forgot a very important day of her in last October.” Chansung said. “MINNIE, YOU MUST HELP US!!!!” They appeal to Sungmin. “Okay, okay. But, finish your dinner first. After that, we together thinking what event have in last October.” Sungmin said to them that look like abandoned children.
“HAE, DON’T WORRY MINNIE IS HERE TO HELP YOU!!!!!!!!!”
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END OF CHAPTER FIVE……PART A……TO BE CONTINUE……Perfect Girl Evolution
I'm sorry for the late updated and my promise to you. I said, I will update this chapter 5 on 31 october but my laptop got virus and I need to repair it. My laptop had come back now, so here the chapter 5 and it's pretty long. So, I divided it into to part. This chapter had two part, part A and part B. I will post the part B tomorrow. So, I'm sorry again and enjoy!!!
Comment are pleasent..