Perfect Girl Evolution *CHAPTER TWO*
Title : Perfect Girl Evolution
Author : tHeRED BunnY+penguin
Type : Multi-chapters
Status : On-going
Chapter : 2
Genre : Comedy, Angst, Drama, Horror
Rated : PG-13
Warnings : Gender Switch!!
Theme Song : SUPER JUNIOR - Shining Star
Disclaimer : I don’t own them, just this fic! This fic is inspired by Japanese manga Perfect Girl Evolution/ヤマトナデシコ七変化 ‘Yamato Nadeshiko Shichi Henge’.
Summary : Hyukjae, Kyuhyun, Chansung and Nichkhun are beautiful, handsome, young men living in a huge mansion. One day, their landlord, whom they call “Auntie Victoria”, asks them a favor to make her niece, Donghae, who’s going to be living with them, into a respectable young lady. She agrees to make their living expenses free of charge if they succeed, but if they fail, she’ll triple their rent. Due to their confidence in knowing how to deal with women, they agree, but once they meet Donghae, they begin to realize that their lovely living arrangements may soon be in jeopardy. But, along the task, Hyukjae had fallen in love with Donghae…
CHAPTER TWO
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Inside the dark room or Donghae room.
“Is she crazy or what?” Hyukjae explore around the room. Suddenly, he heard a crying voice besides follow by scary laugh. “Heheheheeeeee!!!!” “YAH, DONGHAE. DON’T YOU DARE PLAY A PRANK ON ME!!” Hyukjae about turn around and he being shocked by Donghae, who wearing a white clothes full of red blood while holding a knife also with blood.
“AAAHHHH!!!” Hyukjae scream on top of his lungs. “Finally, you here. I can pay back what was you does to me just now.HAHAHA!!!!” While she was laughing like a ghost, Hyukjae take his advantage and pinned her on her bed.
“AAHHHHH!!!! WHAT ARE YOU DOING?” Donghae become panicked with Hyukjae action. “So, before you pay it back. I want take your first.” Hyukjae whisper to her. “AAHHHHH!!!!!”
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At the same time, Kyuhyun, Chansung and Nichkhun wait for someone to come.
“Who you asked for help?” Chansung and Nichkhun asking at the same time. Ding Dong!! “There she is?” Kyuhyun go open the main door. “SHE???” Chansung and Nichkhun confused. Kyuhyun open the main door and revealed Sungmin carrying a big black bag..
“SHE IS MINNIE!! WHY YOU ASK HER??” Chansung and Nichkhun getting confused. “Didn’t I said just now. I will be more powerful if there is Minnie. And if Minnie here, I will protect her.” Kyuhyun explained. “Hello everyone. And this is the things.” Sungmin gave the big black bag to Chansung.
“What this?” Nichkhun asked her. “In this bag all of thing that can banish ghost. I took from my halmeoni. Her named Boa.” Sungmin explained. They three just nodded to her. “We better hurry save Hyukkie now.” All of them rushed to the spot.
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When they in hallway to Donghae room, where is Hyukjae missing. “Kyunnie, I’m scared. Is this the right place?” Sungmin hugs her arms with Kyuhyun arm. “Don’t worry Minnie I will protect you from any danger.” They looked at each other. “I Love Kyunnie…” “Me too. I Love you….” They kissing.
“What was that?” “Khunnie, you better don’t watch it.” Chansung close his brother eyes with his hand. “YAH, YOU TWO IT NOT TIME FOR A KISS. WE HERE TO SAVE HYUKJAE NOT MAKING OUT. YOU TWO BETTER BEING EATEN BY THE GHOST!!!” Chansung getting annoying with Kyuhyun and Sungmin.
“Minnie, we better go save Hyukjae.” Kyuhyun pull Sungmin with him. They finally in front of the door again. All of them gulped and just stading there doing nothing just watching the creepy door. “Kyuhyun open it.” Chansung push Kyuhyun at front. “Minnie, if I die you must find someone else that can make your happy okay.” Kyuhyun said to Sungmin.
“If you die, I die too.” They look at each other. Nichkhun and Chansung getting annoying at them again. “YAH, YOU TWO STOP IT!!” “Chansung please take care of Minnie for me.” Kyuhyun order Chansung. “Yes, yes. I will take care of her for you. If you didn’t die yet, I will help you die.” “WHAT????” Kyuhyun and Sungmin gave him death glare.
“Okay. Okay. I fine.” Their glare make Chansung shut his mouth. “YAH, IT’S NOT TIME FOR THIS!!! HURRY UP OPEN THE DOOR BEFORE HYUKJAE DIE IN THERE!!!!” Nichkhun burst out. When, about Kyuhyun want to open the door a screaming gave them from inside the room. “AAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”
“HYUKJAE!!!” Kyuhyun open the door and revealed Hyukjae on top of Donghae on the bed. “Hyukjae, are you okay?” Kyuhyun asked him. “Ahhh, it’s a ghost below him!!!” Sungmin point to Donghae that look likes a ghost.
Then, Chansung switch on the light and dark leave them. “Look it Hae below her…” Nichkhun finally know it. “AAHHH!!! GET OF ME!!!” Donghae kick Hyukjae until he fall from the bed to the floor. “Hyukkie, how could you do that to her?” Sungmin mad at him.
“It not what you thought. She was trying to kill me.” Hyukjae explained to them. “Hyukjae, why you always making us worried. Just now you kiss her and now you want RAPED her.” Chansung shook his head. “I’m not raped her. She want to…..” Hyukjae couldn’t finish his words when he feel something sharp at his neck. “You will die today.”
“AHH!! DONGHAE DON’T KILL HIM!!!” All of them shout at Donghae. “Donghae. Is she who Kyunnie saying?” Sungmin finally met her. “Donghae, put the knife.” Chansung tried to calm her down. “Hae, don’t do it.” Nichkhun start crying… “No, he wil die to-” Donghae words being cut by Hyukjae that kissing her on the lips again.
“YAHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!! HYUKJAE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT ARE YOU DOING?????????????????????” All of them shocked with Hyukjae action. Hyukjae pull away and that make Donghae become a statue in museum again. “She freeze.” Sungmin said. “HAHA!! You think you can kill me. You who the one who being killed by only the simple kiss.” Hyukjae patted Donghae head.
“Why he can kiss her easily? Is it his first time?” Nichkhun confused with Hyukjae. “Yah, Hyukjae is that your first kiss?” Hyukjae nodded and say, “And I’ll getting addicted to his lips. It’s sweet.” He licked his lips seductively.
“WAHHH!!! SHE SO CUTE!!!!” Sungmin take adventage to flip Donghae hair to see her face. Donghae finally snapped from her statue being and cover her face back with her long hair. “Don’t!!” “Why you cover your face? You sooo cute, you know that.” Sungmin giggled with Donghae cute face.
“Minnie, what are you doing?” Kyuhyun asked her. “Finally, I can see her face. She sooooo cute. I’m getting jealous with her.” Sungmin pouted. “Is it that too cute?” Nichkhun, Chansung, Kyuhyun and Hyukjae wanted to see her face too.
“You all haven’t see her face yet?” Sungmin asked, they just nodded. “Hae, can we see your face again?” Sungmin plead cutely. “No! NO! and NO NO NO!!!” Donghae cover her face with a pillow. “Hae, don’t be like that. We just want to see your face not you body.” All of them gave him a death glare.
“We friend right.” Sungmin smile at her. Donghae feeling happy when Sungmin said that they were friends. In this two years after that happening, no one wants to befriend with her until she met Sungmin. “Only you and Nichkhun can see.” Donghae said.
“WHAT ABOUT US???” The other three guys point at themselves. “NO!!” Donghae answered back. “I will accept it if Minnie can see because she is girl. But, why Nichkhun can see it too? I am not happy with it.” Hyukjae pouted and crossing his arms.
“If you want to know he actually a gi-…OUCH!!!” Chansung got a smack at his stomach by Nichkhun. “Shut off your mouth.” Nichkhun go toward where Sungmin and Donghae there. “Can all of you out of this room..” Nichkhun and Sungmin said to them.
“We better go. UG-” “HYUKJAE DON’T SAY THAT WORD!!” Kyuhyun mention him. “YOU…YOU…” Hyukjae didn’t know what should he call Donghae. “Hyukjae just forget about your words. You make us annoying.” Sungmin and Nichkhun said at the sametime.
“Let’s go Hyukjae..” Chansung and Kyuhyun pull Hyukjae out of Donghae room and bring him downstairs.
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At the living room.
Kyuhyun, Chansung and Hyukjae getting annoying with Sungmin and Nichkhun giggled upstairs. “I’m jealous with they two. They can see Donghae face. I want too.” Chansung pouted. “Not you, me too.” Kyuhyun said. “I don’t want look her face.” Hyukjae said.
A silent fill the living room but being disturbed by phone ringing. Kyuhyun hang up the phone.
“Hallo, mein Junge Babys!”
“What that means?” Chansung asked.
“Hello, my babies boy in German. Then, how she doing?”
“She okay, Auntie.” Kyuhyun answered.
“Now, she was being gloom by Minnie and Khunnie upstairs.” Chansung lied. Hyukjae and Kyuhyun gave him a death glare.
“WHAT??? WOW, FANTASTISCH!!!” Victoria giggles.
“She getting crazy..”
“Hyukjae what did you just said. I’m not deaf yet. Oh, I can wait to meet her tomorrow.”
“WHAT??? TOMORROW??” They shocked with Victoria sudden news.
“Tomorrow, there is a party at my closet friend at her mansion. She wants me to come and brings all my babies.”
“So, that means Donghae too.”
“Of course, not just you four.”
“Can Minnie join too?” Kyuhyun asked Victoria.
“Of course she can. Then, see you tomorrow at the party.” The line disconnect.
“She want to meet her tomorrow.” Kyuhyun look at Chansung. “We must gloom her before the party.” Chansung look at Hyukjae. “The party must be at night. So, we have a time to gloom her.” Hyukjae look at Kyuhyun. “WE MUST DO IT!! WE MUST DO IT!!! FOR OUR RENT”
“We need Minnie help us too.” Hyukjae said. “I know.” “THE PERFECT GIRL EVOLUTION START FROM NOW ON!!!!”
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END OF CHAPTER TWO……TO BE CONTINUE……Perfect Girl Evolution
So, how this fic so far. Is it okay or not? Sungmin appear in this chapter and she will appear in other chapter too.
Please comment after reading. I wanted to know. After this, Hyukjae, Kyuhyun, Chansung and Nichkhun will start their task together with Sungmin to gloom Donghae become a perfect girl.
Author : tHeRED BunnY+penguin
Type : Multi-chapters
Status : On-going
Chapter : 2
Genre : Comedy, Angst, Drama, Horror
Rated : PG-13
Warnings : Gender Switch!!
Theme Song : SUPER JUNIOR - Shining Star
Disclaimer : I don’t own them, just this fic! This fic is inspired by Japanese manga Perfect Girl Evolution/ヤマトナデシコ七変化 ‘Yamato Nadeshiko Shichi Henge’.
Summary : Hyukjae, Kyuhyun, Chansung and Nichkhun are beautiful, handsome, young men living in a huge mansion. One day, their landlord, whom they call “Auntie Victoria”, asks them a favor to make her niece, Donghae, who’s going to be living with them, into a respectable young lady. She agrees to make their living expenses free of charge if they succeed, but if they fail, she’ll triple their rent. Due to their confidence in knowing how to deal with women, they agree, but once they meet Donghae, they begin to realize that their lovely living arrangements may soon be in jeopardy. But, along the task, Hyukjae had fallen in love with Donghae…
CHAPTER TWO
………………………………………………………………
Inside the dark room or Donghae room.
“Is she crazy or what?” Hyukjae explore around the room. Suddenly, he heard a crying voice besides follow by scary laugh. “Heheheheeeeee!!!!” “YAH, DONGHAE. DON’T YOU DARE PLAY A PRANK ON ME!!” Hyukjae about turn around and he being shocked by Donghae, who wearing a white clothes full of red blood while holding a knife also with blood.
“AAAHHHH!!!” Hyukjae scream on top of his lungs. “Finally, you here. I can pay back what was you does to me just now.HAHAHA!!!!” While she was laughing like a ghost, Hyukjae take his advantage and pinned her on her bed.
“AAHHHHH!!!! WHAT ARE YOU DOING?” Donghae become panicked with Hyukjae action. “So, before you pay it back. I want take your first.” Hyukjae whisper to her. “AAHHHHH!!!!!”
………………………………………………………………
At the same time, Kyuhyun, Chansung and Nichkhun wait for someone to come.
“Who you asked for help?” Chansung and Nichkhun asking at the same time. Ding Dong!! “There she is?” Kyuhyun go open the main door. “SHE???” Chansung and Nichkhun confused. Kyuhyun open the main door and revealed Sungmin carrying a big black bag..
“SHE IS MINNIE!! WHY YOU ASK HER??” Chansung and Nichkhun getting confused. “Didn’t I said just now. I will be more powerful if there is Minnie. And if Minnie here, I will protect her.” Kyuhyun explained. “Hello everyone. And this is the things.” Sungmin gave the big black bag to Chansung.
“What this?” Nichkhun asked her. “In this bag all of thing that can banish ghost. I took from my halmeoni. Her named Boa.” Sungmin explained. They three just nodded to her. “We better hurry save Hyukkie now.” All of them rushed to the spot.
………………………………………………………………
When they in hallway to Donghae room, where is Hyukjae missing. “Kyunnie, I’m scared. Is this the right place?” Sungmin hugs her arms with Kyuhyun arm. “Don’t worry Minnie I will protect you from any danger.” They looked at each other. “I Love Kyunnie…” “Me too. I Love you….” They kissing.
“What was that?” “Khunnie, you better don’t watch it.” Chansung close his brother eyes with his hand. “YAH, YOU TWO IT NOT TIME FOR A KISS. WE HERE TO SAVE HYUKJAE NOT MAKING OUT. YOU TWO BETTER BEING EATEN BY THE GHOST!!!” Chansung getting annoying with Kyuhyun and Sungmin.
“Minnie, we better go save Hyukjae.” Kyuhyun pull Sungmin with him. They finally in front of the door again. All of them gulped and just stading there doing nothing just watching the creepy door. “Kyuhyun open it.” Chansung push Kyuhyun at front. “Minnie, if I die you must find someone else that can make your happy okay.” Kyuhyun said to Sungmin.
“If you die, I die too.” They look at each other. Nichkhun and Chansung getting annoying at them again. “YAH, YOU TWO STOP IT!!” “Chansung please take care of Minnie for me.” Kyuhyun order Chansung. “Yes, yes. I will take care of her for you. If you didn’t die yet, I will help you die.” “WHAT????” Kyuhyun and Sungmin gave him death glare.
“Okay. Okay. I fine.” Their glare make Chansung shut his mouth. “YAH, IT’S NOT TIME FOR THIS!!! HURRY UP OPEN THE DOOR BEFORE HYUKJAE DIE IN THERE!!!!” Nichkhun burst out. When, about Kyuhyun want to open the door a screaming gave them from inside the room. “AAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”
“HYUKJAE!!!” Kyuhyun open the door and revealed Hyukjae on top of Donghae on the bed. “Hyukjae, are you okay?” Kyuhyun asked him. “Ahhh, it’s a ghost below him!!!” Sungmin point to Donghae that look likes a ghost.
Then, Chansung switch on the light and dark leave them. “Look it Hae below her…” Nichkhun finally know it. “AAHHH!!! GET OF ME!!!” Donghae kick Hyukjae until he fall from the bed to the floor. “Hyukkie, how could you do that to her?” Sungmin mad at him.
“It not what you thought. She was trying to kill me.” Hyukjae explained to them. “Hyukjae, why you always making us worried. Just now you kiss her and now you want RAPED her.” Chansung shook his head. “I’m not raped her. She want to…..” Hyukjae couldn’t finish his words when he feel something sharp at his neck. “You will die today.”
“AHH!! DONGHAE DON’T KILL HIM!!!” All of them shout at Donghae. “Donghae. Is she who Kyunnie saying?” Sungmin finally met her. “Donghae, put the knife.” Chansung tried to calm her down. “Hae, don’t do it.” Nichkhun start crying… “No, he wil die to-” Donghae words being cut by Hyukjae that kissing her on the lips again.
“YAHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!! HYUKJAE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT ARE YOU DOING?????????????????????” All of them shocked with Hyukjae action. Hyukjae pull away and that make Donghae become a statue in museum again. “She freeze.” Sungmin said. “HAHA!! You think you can kill me. You who the one who being killed by only the simple kiss.” Hyukjae patted Donghae head.
“Why he can kiss her easily? Is it his first time?” Nichkhun confused with Hyukjae. “Yah, Hyukjae is that your first kiss?” Hyukjae nodded and say, “And I’ll getting addicted to his lips. It’s sweet.” He licked his lips seductively.
“WAHHH!!! SHE SO CUTE!!!!” Sungmin take adventage to flip Donghae hair to see her face. Donghae finally snapped from her statue being and cover her face back with her long hair. “Don’t!!” “Why you cover your face? You sooo cute, you know that.” Sungmin giggled with Donghae cute face.
“Minnie, what are you doing?” Kyuhyun asked her. “Finally, I can see her face. She sooooo cute. I’m getting jealous with her.” Sungmin pouted. “Is it that too cute?” Nichkhun, Chansung, Kyuhyun and Hyukjae wanted to see her face too.
“You all haven’t see her face yet?” Sungmin asked, they just nodded. “Hae, can we see your face again?” Sungmin plead cutely. “No! NO! and NO NO NO!!!” Donghae cover her face with a pillow. “Hae, don’t be like that. We just want to see your face not you body.” All of them gave him a death glare.
“We friend right.” Sungmin smile at her. Donghae feeling happy when Sungmin said that they were friends. In this two years after that happening, no one wants to befriend with her until she met Sungmin. “Only you and Nichkhun can see.” Donghae said.
“WHAT ABOUT US???” The other three guys point at themselves. “NO!!” Donghae answered back. “I will accept it if Minnie can see because she is girl. But, why Nichkhun can see it too? I am not happy with it.” Hyukjae pouted and crossing his arms.
“If you want to know he actually a gi-…OUCH!!!” Chansung got a smack at his stomach by Nichkhun. “Shut off your mouth.” Nichkhun go toward where Sungmin and Donghae there. “Can all of you out of this room..” Nichkhun and Sungmin said to them.
“We better go. UG-” “HYUKJAE DON’T SAY THAT WORD!!” Kyuhyun mention him. “YOU…YOU…” Hyukjae didn’t know what should he call Donghae. “Hyukjae just forget about your words. You make us annoying.” Sungmin and Nichkhun said at the sametime.
“Let’s go Hyukjae..” Chansung and Kyuhyun pull Hyukjae out of Donghae room and bring him downstairs.
………………………………………………………………
At the living room.
Kyuhyun, Chansung and Hyukjae getting annoying with Sungmin and Nichkhun giggled upstairs. “I’m jealous with they two. They can see Donghae face. I want too.” Chansung pouted. “Not you, me too.” Kyuhyun said. “I don’t want look her face.” Hyukjae said.
A silent fill the living room but being disturbed by phone ringing. Kyuhyun hang up the phone.
“Hallo, mein Junge Babys!”
“What that means?” Chansung asked.
“Hello, my babies boy in German. Then, how she doing?”
“She okay, Auntie.” Kyuhyun answered.
“Now, she was being gloom by Minnie and Khunnie upstairs.” Chansung lied. Hyukjae and Kyuhyun gave him a death glare.
“WHAT??? WOW, FANTASTISCH!!!” Victoria giggles.
“She getting crazy..”
“Hyukjae what did you just said. I’m not deaf yet. Oh, I can wait to meet her tomorrow.”
“WHAT??? TOMORROW??” They shocked with Victoria sudden news.
“Tomorrow, there is a party at my closet friend at her mansion. She wants me to come and brings all my babies.”
“So, that means Donghae too.”
“Of course, not just you four.”
“Can Minnie join too?” Kyuhyun asked Victoria.
“Of course she can. Then, see you tomorrow at the party.” The line disconnect.
“She want to meet her tomorrow.” Kyuhyun look at Chansung. “We must gloom her before the party.” Chansung look at Hyukjae. “The party must be at night. So, we have a time to gloom her.” Hyukjae look at Kyuhyun. “WE MUST DO IT!! WE MUST DO IT!!! FOR OUR RENT”
“We need Minnie help us too.” Hyukjae said. “I know.” “THE PERFECT GIRL EVOLUTION START FROM NOW ON!!!!”
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END OF CHAPTER TWO……TO BE CONTINUE……Perfect Girl Evolution
So, how this fic so far. Is it okay or not? Sungmin appear in this chapter and she will appear in other chapter too.
Please comment after reading. I wanted to know. After this, Hyukjae, Kyuhyun, Chansung and Nichkhun will start their task together with Sungmin to gloom Donghae become a perfect girl.