Challenge 011, "Distance, Long" by bingeling and dogeared

[dogeared]

Title: Distance, Long
Vid by bingeling
Story by dogeared
Challenge: 011 - illustrative typography
Pairing: John/Rodney
Music: "Delay" by Craig Armstrong

Comments

[kensieg]

fabulous!! The music is what transformed it from good to great.

[dogeared]

Thank you, from both of us! Yes, aesc was our last-minute savior with the music!

[bibliokat]

Wow! I love the vid and the story together! Great music choice- very melancholy.

[dogeared]

Thank you so much, from both of us, and I'm so glad the music worked for you!

[dogeared]

Thank you!! ♥

[aesc]

Eeeeeeeeee, I love it I love it!!! Bing absolutely nailed the nuances--the translation from the text to the vid is perfect. *loves!*

Rodney says, "Okay, yes, bye," and he counts two, three, four of Sheppard's slow, even, faraway breaths before he hangs up.

asd;lkjdf;lkjdgkj poor Rodney! Poor boys! I love the slowdown at the end, Rodney reluctant to hang up, wanting to hang on a little bit longer.

[dogeared]

Thank you so much, aitches! I think Bing nailed ALL of it!! *gleeees*

[newkidfan]

This is freaking fantastic! I love stories focusing on single moments... every word has so much weight. Wonderful!

bingeling You are made of awesome. I love what you've done, really, really amazing. I'm making little victory arms and noises of glee. Thank god I'm alone in the room.

[dogeared]

Thank you SO much! I think Bing realized the best parts of the story so well, and made the whole thing that much better!

[bingbulette]

Eeeh thanks a dozen! :D

+makes flaily arms of glee in return+