Raito Yagami

Jun 28, 2007 18:24


Raito Yagami
Death Note Fanfiction; the devil walks among men

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fantomeq June 29 2007, 01:38:29 UTC
Lovely description of a magnetic personality.

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tininess June 29 2007, 03:48:12 UTC
Very Raito Accurate. The social function environment really helps your fic. *thumbs up*

Little beta-ing need.

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artificalapple June 29 2007, 03:56:33 UTC
thanks.

(well considering I lack a beta that would be true. I'll look over it again)

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fluffyfledgling June 29 2007, 06:09:07 UTC
Hm. Adolf Hitler?

Very interesting that you wrote about him from the perspective of an ordinary person. I've actually never seen Light written about in this way before, and it's very refreshing! I find Light quite interesting myself. I'll be left pondering on this particular little piece, that's for sure.

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pisces_rules June 29 2007, 06:54:43 UTC
Ok, WOW! I have never seen Light portrayed so amazingly and unbelievably truthful! I myself have failed miserably to present him in such a way in my fic. This is... *sigh* This is just... perfect. Yes, no other way to describe it.

You are my star! :D

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steppinrazor88 June 29 2007, 14:21:05 UTC
That is how one would look at Raito! I liked it very much!

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