FMA: Alphabet Challenge: Fencing Time

[artemisrae]

Title: Fencing Time
Rating: K+
Characters: Havoc/Falman
Summary: He’s always known he’s more laid back than Falman, but this is almost ridiculous.
A/N: Written as part of my Alphabet Drabbles challenge, as requested by rare_fandom with the prompt “urgency”. No spoilers, but holy crap I wrote boykissing! This challenge has presented all kinds of firsts for me

Comments

[evil_little_dog]

Oh, how...sad. Poignant, I believe, is the word I'm looking for.

[artemisrae]

Well thank you! It was kinda an experiment for me but... I'm glad it worked out. I was nervous.

[mamuchan]

Love the last line. And love Falman. ♥

[artemisrae]

He doesn't get much love does he? I'm glad you like it!

[rare_fandom]

And again, major awesome. I love the contrast between the two, and the final moment when Havoc stumbles on where Falman’s coming from. And you get bonus points for using first names.

Again, thanks for writing this for me.

[artemisrae]

Oh I'm so so very glad you like it. There was no problem writing it for you! I got the first line in my head and it kinda took off from there. And it was nice to try something different. I definitely feel sorta confident to try some other new things. I'm just glad it lived up to your expectations!

[cornerofmadness]

nice look at their contrasts and that last line is a killer

[artemisrae]

hee, thanks. I need to be more careful about killing off my readers... its bad for repeat business...

[cornerofmadness]

HAHA

[moonsleight]

Very strong. The last line gave me a tiny chill, I swear. xD

[artemisrae]

Havoc just doesn't plan ahead the way Falman does...

I'm glad you liked it!