FMA: 52 Flavours, Prompt 26

[artemisrae]

Title: My Finger on Your Trigger
Series: Fullmetal Alchemist
Theme no.: 26. the strong and ephemeral
Pairing: Ed/Winry
Rating: M
Summary: Ed usually likes to surprise her fresh out of the shower.
Notes: Second of a three fic update for

Comments

[monique_27]

*fans self* Oh my goodness...

...that was hott! *^.~*

When she finally peaks - dresser rattling or books falling - clenching and trembling and groaning in front of him, he holds her for a minute, until he’s sure she won’t collapse from her shaking knees, and then pulls away, pants uncomfortably tight, and picks up a towel before getting into the shower himself, confident in the knowledge that she’ll get him back, maybe later tonight, but most likely the next time she has him laid out on her workbench. <- Absolute, utter WIN!

Very well done.

[artemisrae]

*blush* Thank you! I was nervous about putting this up, so I'm happy you approve!

[evil_little_dog]

Oh...yay. Hot. Really hot. *beams*

[artemisrae]

Yeah I'm totally sittin over here blushing. Someday I'll get used to it! ...Maybe.

[evil_little_dog]

hahahaah. Good luck.

[artemisrae]

Thanks - god knows I need it. There's at least one more in this vein.

[fairy_dogma]

Whoa.
Q: How hot was this?
A: *watches steam rise from comp* Very.

I am indeed impressed.

[artemisrae]

TRUE FACT: The steam is from the blush on my face.

[lyricnonsense]

*snort* I still can't write sex, for reals, which is a problem since Div will need it at some point.

But yes, that was very steamy, and very restrained. Loved it, as always.

[artemisrae]

YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW EXCITED I AM THAT DIV IS GOING TO GO THERE. *flails*

I would offer you advice, but I have none. Just be sure to keep someone nearby to talk you out of deleting it everytime you start blushing so bad you go into denial over it. (Josie's talked me out of deleting this one MORE than once, no lie.)

[lyricnonsense]

Don't hold your breath. Given how slow Ed is being, it'll be a while before he's ready for that step.

But yes, I'm glad Josie didn't talk you out of this, because it was good.

[artemisrae]

At the rate Ed's going, he'll be ready for some sexin at arounnnnd the age of 43. Of course, that's ballpark, and that's only if Sara doesn't kick him to the curb in frustration. (SHE HAS NEEDS TOO YA KNOW.)

[ladyyami]

That was amazing o_o Geez! It's pretty chilly outside but definitely warm here in front of the computer :D Nice work!!

[artemisrae]

*blush* Thank you! I really am glad people liked it, for how nervous I was to post it.