Fiction : Prompt A Day - Un-Confession; I'm Dead; Follow The Stranger

[arrankaara]

Title: Un-Confession | I'm Dead | Follow The Stranger.
Type: Original Fiction.
Prompt: Taken from prompt_a_day. #036 unrequited love; #037 "don't tell anyone, but..."; #039 jailbait.
Claimer: Except the prompts, the ideas of the drabbles are mine.
Rating: PG15.
Word Count: 982 words.
Summary: Three unrelated drabbles based on the themes.
Author's Note: Haha.

Comments

[ajbunk]

I liked them, but overall I think you need to work on your conclusions a little. They don't seem to finish that strong despite the fact that you have some cool concepts you are playing with.

[arrankaara]

About the conclusion part, I realised that too. But to the end, I kinda... well, lost steam. Or something. Was distracted about something too, actually. I was thinking about expanding them, but didn't have enough motivation to do so. XD

[ajbunk]

You know, I'm wanting to become more of an editor than a writer any more. If you ever want me to take a look at any of your stuff and give you some critical feedback on it, I'd be more than happy to do so.