Addictive obsession - Chapter one

[aroruae]

Comments

[sheenalinh]

I got my dose >D Thanks
And here is a little opinion.. Writing yaoi, the hardest thing is to distinguish the "he" and "he". Since this is only the first chapter, so I bet you want readers to guess ahead of who and who. But maybe a clearer description in the future is more welcome.
I like the rough characters and their bad words. Sth rough and raw like that. If I can have my dose for every chapter then I'm up for the next round XDD~

[aroruae]

I know because I have the same problem when I read yaoi :P But this time we didn't want to use names, especially Kazuya's ^^ That's why maybe it's a little hard to see which one is who :/ The next chapters should be easier to read.

And you'll have your dose almost every chapter :> Each of them include a sex scene or, at least, that's what we'll try to do xD

Thanks for your comment ~

[aroruae]

I'm glad you liked it ~

*hugs back*

[aroruae]

We'll try to post it soon then ^^

[pinkporca]

Quite good and interesting. Will look forward to the next chapter. Thanks for writing and sharing.

[aroruae]

We're glad you liked it ~ The next chapter will be hopefully soon xD

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[mouter]

Soo good dear! I just wanted more and more :D
Well done and well written.
Thank you :)

[aroruae]

And more and more you'll have lol

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[aroruae]

Sorry about that T_T We always mentioned when we wrote about the other. I mean if we say something about Kazuya, for example, and then we want to pass to Jin, we had always said his name for you to know that it's not about Kazuya anymore but Jin. We didn't want to use their names too much in this chapter but things change with the second one ;)

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