I lost it... as in I was hand editing a printed copy. And I think it must have been accidentally thrown away or placed on top of the car and then blown away...
I'll send you what I've got anyway... but I wouldn't waste my time. (Especially since I *had* parts of it edited it makes me sad to look at the first draft again.) I will go back to it... because I really like the story, and think it will only get better with editing. There's lots that needs to be changed. Ideas added. Things removed because they were just written in the heat of the moment. heh.
I always feel like my ideas are really stupid when I attempt to write them out as well, but I'll try...
It was actually a dream I had during the last Nano. About an owl, who was the queen of all the owls. (And also most of the carniverous birds.) She finds a hawk hatchling and takes him "under her wing" (harhar) and raises him as her own. The hawk grows up and somehow... can turn into a human boy. (I'm not sure on all the details yet. :P) and meets a sparrow... Yeah... I'll send you an e-mail so everyone doesn't need to know how lame I am. :P
I'll send you what I've got anyway... but I wouldn't waste my time. (Especially since I *had* parts of it edited it makes me sad to look at the first draft again.) I will go back to it... because I really like the story, and think it will only get better with editing. There's lots that needs to be changed. Ideas added. Things removed because they were just written in the heat of the moment. heh.
I always feel like my ideas are really stupid when I attempt to write them out as well, but I'll try...
It was actually a dream I had during the last Nano. About an owl, who was the queen of all the owls. (And also most of the carniverous birds.) She finds a hawk hatchling and takes him "under her wing" (harhar) and raises him as her own. The hawk grows up and somehow... can turn into a human boy. (I'm not sure on all the details yet. :P) and meets a sparrow... Yeah... I'll send you an e-mail so everyone doesn't need to know how lame I am. :P
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