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Fanfic: Mile High S&M Club Chapter 3

Oct 01, 2009 01:33

Title: Mile High S&M Club
Chapter 3/3
Pairing/Characters: Clyde/Salem, Rios
Warning: The plane’s end is approaching and so is the story’s. Hard R.

( Fic under here. )

fanfic, rating r, rios, clyde, clyde/salem, salem, slash

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nanirisfic January 3 2010, 05:58:21 UTC

Thanks for the review. There's not that many in-game moments with a lax enough time frame to play around with. I always wondered why the sudden Clyde had a bloody grin on that plane.

I believe I read those two, I remember they had long titles and were post-game. Not that many fanfics roaming around the net. Both definitely played a part in influencing my interpretation of Clyde.

sweet! spawnstar January 3 2010, 06:38:30 UTC

yep those are probably the ones then. The penname is spawnstar. I'm glad you liked them heh (at least I hope!). Hard to find Clyde/Salem fans indeed! ;) but yeah if you want to throw any feedback my way let me know k? Are you going to be writing more??
~spawnstar

Re: sweet! nanirisfic January 3 2010, 16:18:39 UTC

From what I recall, they were very graphically explicit and truly deserved their NC-17 rating, so kudos on being able to take it there. Not many can.

I did feel that it was a bit rushed though. I could see Clyde developing an obsession easily since he's obviously mentally unbalanced. And yes, Salem does have a weird sense of puppy dog subservience lurking under his skin. But to jump from hating Clyde to full-blown stockholm syndrome was a bit to quick for my tastes. I would have liked to see more of that middle ground to delve into the hows and whys.

I really liked Rios in the second story, because I can totally see him feel and act that way. Protective yet awkwardly chaste and totally wanting into Salem's pants.

I have plans for writing more, but I'm currently active in Final Fantasy 8 and Left 4 Dead fandoms, have three fic ideas to write for [Prototype] and three fic ideas for Army of Two. It comes down to what I'm currently inspired to write.

Though this convo has stirred the AoT pot.

Re: true.. spawnstar January 4 2010, 01:27:06 UTC

yep I agree, I had to even make an author's note about that "rushed" feel in the second story, though it was sequel ;) thank you for the feedback!! It was really tough actually putting them in a relationship in both fics so I tried to keep it rocky and twisted. OMG L4D! Prototype!! yay can't wait!! Let me know when k??

Re: true.. nanirisfic January 5 2010, 02:44:19 UTC

There's already about seven chapters of the L4D fic, it's genfic and titled "A hunter captured" can either be found on my fic journal this one, or on ff.net.

Currently typing up a genfic for Prototype titled "Frankestein's monster."

My longest work, rated nc-17, is Hands on Experience and is currently in the works. FF8, but still easy enough to follow.

I can friend you and you can friend me back, when I post anything new it'll show up on your friend's list.

Re: done! spawnstar January 5 2010, 15:59:46 UTC

alright I will do that. Going to check out those fics you wrote! :)

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