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Doctor Who: Three Parallels

Aug 13, 2011 20:02

Title: Three Parallels
Author: arliddian
Rating: T/PG-13
Fandom: Doctor Who
Characters/Pairing: Amy/Rory
Summary: One time Amy woke up late, in three different universes.
Word Count: 961
Author's Note: Prompt - Rouse. This is my first foray into the DW fandom and I'm a little nervous about it, so I'd really appreciate your comments and reviews!
Warnings: ( Read more... )

pairing: amy/rory, prompts, char: dw: rory, fandom: doctor who, char: dw: amy

Comments 17

beingfacetious August 13 2011, 14:24:05 UTC

I love this very, very much. You've done a great job keeping it consistently Amy in all three scenarios with the subtle differences based on what's missing each time. I think you've really nailed the way she feels about Rory, as well. Just really excellent, especially for your first time writing for Who! Thanks for sharing on SITM!

arliddian August 14 2011, 00:52:48 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it and that you think I got the characters right. I really appreciate your comment! =)

ladymercury_10 August 13 2011, 14:48:12 UTC

This is really lovely! I like seeing Amy's feelings for Rory in the different universes, and how they contrast with his absence. I love this part:
There is something comforting in the way he always looks at her - not full of desire like the (mostly) drunken boys she is paid to kiss, but full of nervous wonder and tenderness and love.

arliddian August 14 2011, 00:53:46 UTC

Thank you! I'm kind of proud of that line, so I'm glad you liked it so much!

_thirty2flavors August 13 2011, 16:08:46 UTC

Awww this is very sweet. Amy Pond and her three different lives are quite interesting and this was a good and realistic look into what all three of them might have been like. I like the way you wrote her affection for Rory, seeping through even into the second reality where she knows something is missing.

Lastly LOL I can't help but notice you may have accidentally tagged this wrong: you have "pairing: allan/djaq".

arliddian August 14 2011, 00:54:39 UTC

I always thought it must be weird to have these three different sets of memories! Those kids have been through too many lifetimes. I'm glad you thought it was realistic, and that you enjoyed it!

And OOPS! Darn scroll button! Fixed now! =D

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arliddian August 14 2011, 00:54:56 UTC

Thank you so very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! =)

quean_of_swords August 13 2011, 17:58:01 UTC

Lovely lovely! Your Amy is just perfect. The second scenario broke my heart a little.

arliddian August 14 2011, 00:55:21 UTC

Aw, thank you! I'm glad you thought the characterisation was right! =)