Geesh, it's sure dusty in here!
Let's see if I can remember how to do this... if not, you haven't missed much for sure.
This is going to be used as a forum for my poems... if you read them, great, if you have a comment, excellent, if you critique it, outstanding! Just try to be constructive... I've had enough of people barfing when they read them and having to shower afterwards. Everything I post on here is my own creation unless I add the authors name.
I'll be easy on you this first time...
Soul Fire
A feeble glimmer remains within
Where once a wildfire seethed
Poverty of fuel holds not the cause
Nor dearth of air to breathe
As cold intense sucks life from flame
And negates light and warmth
Loss leaves a flickering forlorn hope
For life’s harsh wind to snuff
This is going to be used as a forum for my poems... if you read them, great, if you have a comment, excellent, if you critique it, outstanding! Just try to be constructive... I've had enough of people barfing when they read them and having to shower afterwards. Everything I post on here is my own creation unless I add the authors name.
I'll be easy on you this first time...
Soul Fire
A feeble glimmer remains within
Where once a wildfire seethed
Poverty of fuel holds not the cause
Nor dearth of air to breathe
As cold intense sucks life from flame
And negates light and warmth
Loss leaves a flickering forlorn hope
For life’s harsh wind to snuff