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[arleneashe]

I flew last night in dreams
Over fields and crystal streams.
Through dark of night
My heart took flight
And I bathed in moonlight’s beams.

I think this last line needs to be :
And I soared in moonlight's beams.
I'm sure I'll change it several times yet.

Comments

[anonymous]

Lovely. Just lovely !

[arleneashe]

Thank you, dear friend... and I hope your dreams have you flying high!

[sasquatch1965]

soared does sound better ... but either way, I like it sweetie