More Smile....

[arithion]

Yep... Sixth installment

Title: Smile: Seek Me
Author: Arithion
Rating: G
Genre: Angstish, bit of drama… um… yeah
Pairing: None really, heavy Fuji/Tez friendship… imply all you want though…ok and I’m willing to admit shonen-ai hints too…*grumbles*
Chapter: Six…
Summary: What’s behind a smile…?
Warning: This did not turn out the way I intended…it’s

Comments

[fic_faery]

Is it bad of me to laugh out loud when Fuji is planning torture and murder for people? That must be a fun part about writing Fuji though, he is caring and protective of people but he's also not afraid to deliver punishment. So many contradictions behind that smile it must be fun to create them all and add to the thoughts behind the facade he puts up.

I like how you keep your metaphors moving throughout the story, the Tezuka book with pages or words in English needing translating, or the road to Rome and the others that just seem so natural in your story that I barely notice them but still add so much.

I love your Eiji, the way you describe him moving and talking is so him. Even his studying habits scram Eiji.

OH the ending was so sweet, and I like how Tezuka's fingers just seemed drawn to Fuji's hair and how Fuji is constantly struggling to hold up his end of this frienship and opening up.

[arithion]

Yay, you liked my Eiji! Thank you! I have a really bad habit with metaphors... they tend to take over my life...

So glad you liked!

[nekomiao]

I loooove your Kikumaruuu!! I love you soooooo much when you write about him! Omg Omg waaai!! I wanna marry someone like that guy seriously.

It amused Fuji no end, to assign the dates of important world events to different brands and flavours of toothpaste, to different types of burgers, drinks, sports shoe brands…and tennis balls and moves.

hahah "Can you believe it Fuji? My sister used up the last of my toothpaste!"
The things he talks about are so cute...