Dark Deeds Indeed
'Butter shot out of the end of the Reverend Green’s scone in a golden arc as he bit down heavily on his sultana scone.'
One of the most badly written lines of (fan)fiction I have ever read. How can a piece of prose with an opening sentence like that go on to be a runner-up in a world class newspaper's story writing competition?
One of the most badly written lines of (fan)fiction I have ever read. How can a piece of prose with an opening sentence like that go on to be a runner-up in a world class newspaper's story writing competition?