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Fic: Another Story - Cesare/Lucrezia

Jun 20, 2012 20:16

Title: Another Story

Fandom: The Borgias

Characters: Cesare/Lucrezia

Rating: T

Story: AU set in the future, where Cesare and Lucrezia did their runaway.

Warning: Incest, because Cesare and Lucrezia after all.

A/N: Not betaed and probably made few typos, but I hope they are not too many. lol Anyhow, enjoy!

( Rimini, 1500 ... )

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honeymink June 21 2012, 01:38:07 UTC

That was lovely, Arinna! Finally some CL again (albeit not as porn-y as one hoped ;)). I like that the occasional fighting about territory seems to be enough for Cesare. He hasn't abandoned everything he ever wanted, he still has a bit of that but his priority have shifted even more towards Lucrezia (you might have given her another name in the story, that was a bit close to her actual name :P ). Anyway, that was really lovely. Also that Rodrigo was so old and broken he didn't even fight with them anymore - sad in a way. In any case, lovely story.

arinnaval June 21 2012, 05:28:35 UTC

I'm getting to the smutty fic step by step. :P Thank you, Nina. <3

honeymink June 21 2012, 17:38:47 UTC

I'm dying in anticipation. :) No really! Just so glad somebody talented is wrting CL fic again, somehow there has been a real drought throughout the season when it came to our OTP. :(

arinnaval June 21 2012, 19:29:13 UTC

Maybe because we didn't get that much scenes? It's frustrating me a bit, because most of the promo pics of the s2 were with Cesare and Lucrezia. I thought we're gonna get as much scenes as we've got the s1.

I hope we'll get more the next season. lol but I doubt. And thank you once again, hun.

honeymink June 22 2012, 01:33:58 UTC

I think they did get scenes but the problem with them was that most of them focused on the baby and other than that their attention was on "how do I slut it up with those dudes from Genoa" and "Caterina Sforza was a good lay but honestly I had a bigger orgasm killing my brother".

Basically what I mean was, even when they were close and somewhat intimate it seemed like their minds were still elsewhere something I never observed last season and if it was - like with Lucrezia's marriage, Cesare noticed and made a point by asking her about it although she was reluctant if not defiant to answer because she wanted to be an adult which in her mind back then probably meant being an adult is when you are a wife.

So long story short. I don't feel so inspired myself and I really wanted to. :( Hopefully your sequel fic will light a spark. :) Can't wait!

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