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[arimoto_san]

i'm in a band.
we're starting out.
working on our first song.
that whole deal.

so with that in mind..

i'm the singer--
and as that
i'm writing lyrics.

i always did terrible in school with writing, but i always liked my own stuff and thought it was good, just didn't go with SCHOOL writing, you know?

so

i was wondering if anyone thought they wouldn't mind looking over my lyrics and just giving me feedback.

not like it's an essay or anything, just if it sounds stupid or whatever.

ok bye