Thank you. This was just perfect. I loved that you bought out both sides of Roslin. And the power play between Six and Roslin. Wow. And Maya just caught in the middle.
I loved "We do as the Gods will," in response to Six's God comment.
Very, very happy camper. Off to print so I can reread.
*wipes brow in relief* Oh good! I'm glad you liked this. I was fretting over it the whole time I was writing it, hoping it would live up to your requests. I'd actually wanted it darker, but this is what I got...
Part of me had wanted to continue it from that point, but I couldn't find a way to do it without ruining what had been done. Then I'd considered a sequel from either Roslin's or, more likely, Maya's POV, but decided [with a little help from shatterpath] that it would definitely take emphasis away from this one...
Before I realize what has happened, Roslin is across the room, one hand tightly wrapped around my throat. "If you ever touch Maya or our daughter again, I'll frakking kill you and any other copies that are laying around waiting for you to die. Are we clear on that?"
And that was such a perfect line. Loved this in all it's dark and disturbing glory.
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I loved "We do as the Gods will," in response to Six's God comment.
Very, very happy camper. Off to print so I can reread.
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Part of me had wanted to continue it from that point, but I couldn't find a way to do it without ruining what had been done. Then I'd considered a sequel from either Roslin's or, more likely, Maya's POV, but decided [with a little help from shatterpath] that it would definitely take emphasis away from this one...
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Before I realize what has happened, Roslin is across the room, one hand tightly wrapped around my throat. "If you ever touch Maya or our daughter again, I'll frakking kill you and any other copies that are laying around waiting for you to die. Are we clear on that?"
And that was such a perfect line. Loved this in all it's dark and disturbing glory.
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