SPARRING PARTNERS - 1 of 5 - Willow/Tara NC-17

[arianillyn]

Title:  SPARRING PARTNERS

Author:  Ariel

Pairing:  Willow/Tara

Feedback:  “Oh, yes!”  All feedback gratefully accepted; specific input welcome.

Disclaimers:  These aren’t my characters, but I love to take them for a ride!

Spoilers:  Tara’s ‘secret’ from the episode of “Family” in season 5 is used briefly.

Summary:  Takes place on the last week of their

Comments

[wildsweetcathy]

This is a wonderfully suspenseful and erotic story. I particularly loved Buffy's lines and thoughts and Willow's babbling monologue about things being slippery (ha ha!) Your writing has a nice sense of flow and you leave the reader at the exact spot of wanting more. Can't wait to see part 2! P.S. The dialogue is also very characteristic of the characters too.

[katmarajade]

LOL! All those interruptions! hehe. And I loved how none of them even felt unbelievable. Buffy in particular was spot on-- great job with her. I love the idea of Tara swearing when sexually frustrated and this was so warm and sexy and sweet.

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!

[arianillyn]

Katmarajade,
Hey, thanks - I had a hard time finding a home for this story and it means EVERYTHING to get such generous feedback.

Swan Secrets, thanks so much for cheering me on through this - I'm so GRATEFUL.

Wild SweetCathy, If I get a porn writing job, I'll have you to thank!